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Bullet to the Brain

Updated on February 22, 2013
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The painful things

You said to me

Come and go

Over and over

In my mind



Heart beaten in

Torn apart

Why did it have to happen

This way

I don't want you

To make me cry


I don't want you

To hurt me


All the heartache

Has torn me


Limb to limb

I can't think anymore

I am stuck in

My mind haze




Who I really



Blown through me

Like a bullet

To the brain


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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago

      Thank you for stopping by Shanmarie. :)

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      These are unfortunate emotions that all too many can relate to. Thanks for sharing.

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago

      Mhatter thank you for stopping by. :)

      Torrilynn thank you for stopping by. :)

      Valleypoet thank you fro your kind words. :)

      Ruby thank you for your kind words. :)

      Eric thanks for stopping by. This poem is using symbolism not romanticizing death in anyway and is not to be taken literally in anyway. :)

      Gypsy thank you for your kind words. :)

      Frank thank you for your kind words. :)

      Gypsy thank you for your kind words. :)

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      Gypsy48 4 years ago

      Awesome poem. True painful emotion. Voted up.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      raw, strong, amazing I love it :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      WOW Voted up and awesome. Powerful and emotional. Like a speeding bullet straight to the heart. Passing this on.

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      Eric Dierker 4 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      No my sweet it is not right to finish a love complete. This hub may harm others, who do not know druthers. I beg you to reconsider in your "normal" brain which to others causes pain. I only see my own daughter reading this fine words spoke and think she is like your described folk.

      Please do not romanticize or make appealing such thoughts.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very intense and emotional indeed..Awesome..

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      An intense write...nicely done:-))

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      Thanks for this hub. Intriguing and yet beautiful. Thanks. Voted up.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Oh yes. I remember it well. Thank you for this.