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Bullet to the Brain

Updated on February 22, 2013
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The painful things

You said to me

Come and go

Over and over

In my mind

Jealousy

Rage

Heart beaten in

Torn apart

Why did it have to happen

This way

I don't want you

To make me cry

Anymore

I don't want you

To hurt me

Anymore

All the heartache

Has torn me

From

Limb to limb

I can't think anymore

I am stuck in

My mind haze

Absolute

Uncertainty

To

Who I really

Am

Emotions

Blown through me

Like a bullet

To the brain

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    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      5 years ago

      Thank you for stopping by Shanmarie. :)

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      Shannon Henry 

      5 years ago from Texas

      These are unfortunate emotions that all too many can relate to. Thanks for sharing.

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      5 years ago

      Mhatter thank you for stopping by. :)

      Torrilynn thank you for stopping by. :)

      Valleypoet thank you fro your kind words. :)

      Ruby thank you for your kind words. :)

      Eric thanks for stopping by. This poem is using symbolism not romanticizing death in anyway and is not to be taken literally in anyway. :)

      Gypsy thank you for your kind words. :)

      Frank thank you for your kind words. :)

      Gypsy thank you for your kind words. :)

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      Gypsy48 

      5 years ago

      Awesome poem. True painful emotion. Voted up.

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      Frank Atanacio 

      5 years ago from Shelton

      raw, strong, amazing I love it :)

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      WOW Voted up and awesome. Powerful and emotional. Like a speeding bullet straight to the heart. Passing this on.

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      Eric Dierker 

      5 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      No my sweet it is not right to finish a love complete. This hub may harm others, who do not know druthers. I beg you to reconsider in your "normal" brain which to others causes pain. I only see my own daughter reading this fine words spoke and think she is like your described folk.

      Please do not romanticize or make appealing such thoughts.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very intense and emotional indeed..Awesome..

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      Valleypoet 

      5 years ago

      An intense write...nicely done:-))

    • torrilynn profile image

      torrilynn 

      5 years ago

      Thanks for this hub. Intriguing and yet beautiful. Thanks. Voted up.

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      Oh yes. I remember it well. Thank you for this.

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