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Emptiness (wish you were here...)

Updated on July 25, 2016

Just because I'm breathing doesn't mean I'm alive.

The sun had flown away
And the moon is now dead
What curse has befallen me
That left my life hanging on a thread.


My heart refused to beat
And pain is softly killing me
Dragging me to the inner depths of despair
Where only silver eyes could see.


Broken spells and hollow dreams
Imprisoned me on my own cell
Wishes and chants
Are nothing in this empty shell.


Clouds do forget
And sky do vanish
Darkness veils my heart
Where loneliness cannot perish.


Love turns to hate
As the sea turns to wave
How can I find my way out
In this scary and unending cave.


For this last time I wish
Colors won't fade
As I find my peace
In heaven where I am laid.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Im so glad to meet you here.

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      Ashish Joshi 5 years ago from India

      My pleasure, spy...This poem reminds me of one of my own...way back.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Ash. Thank you!

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      Ashish Joshi 5 years ago from India

      Well written, spy! I loved "silver eyes"...

      'up' and 'beautiful'

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow thank you so much.. Yeah, its kinda sad though..

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Another lovely but sad poem, but lovely still! Love the speech!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Dawne..Thank you for reading. Really appreciate it much.

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      DAWNEMARS 5 years ago from The Edge of a Forest in Europe

      Pretty, moving words. Thanks for sharing this with us all.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Sikandar. Really appreciate you stopping by and read this :)

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      sikandar khalid 5 years ago

      you're welcome and in friendship there is no need of thanks friend's want

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi there Sonny! thank you so much for the comment.

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      Sonny Ellar 5 years ago from Saudi Arabia

      This is beautiful! a piece that no one cannot relate.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Sikandar and Cath, my heart says thank you for the wonderful comments.

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      Cathleena Beams 5 years ago from Lascassas, Tennessee

      Great poem - I love the last line where peace at last is found in heaven. No more darkness or loneliness can befall and the captive is set free.

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      sikandar khalid 5 years ago

      owsam

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Bluesea and Esther, thank you for reading and for the message.

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      Esther Earl 5 years ago

      Very beautiful and so touchy.

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      bluesea 5 years ago

      very heart touching

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Epi! I am so thrilled to read this message of yours. Oh thank you so much!

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...well you are certainly not an unknown poet of perfection as you have many followers and admirers and this is as good as it gets here at the HUB - with a piece I wish I had written - oh so lovely and sublime and created in your very own special language - lake erie time ontario canada - and sending you warm wishes and good energy at 10:31pm

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks for stopping by Gypsy.. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Sadness flowing down like a river. Remember the saying every cloud has a silver lining and heads up. Better days are coming.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Bravewarrior and KJ force..thank you for dropping by.

      no..it happened once upon a time :)

      Thanks for the messages! Have a nice day!

      xoxo,m.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Unknown spy...interesting poem...do I detect that you have become a prisoner of your own mind/body and soul ? The poem is well written, but I am concerned for.. you appear to be in a not so happy place..begone negativity, set this prisoner free..

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      My heart bleeds for you, unknown spy! Love yourself and be damned with those who don't see your spirit!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Gerg!

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      Gerg 5 years ago from California

      Artfully expressed emotion - very nicely done, unknown spy!

      G

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Jon, thank you for the wondeful comment ..well to be honest im also flaterred to called a great writer :)

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      Jonathan McCloskey 5 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      Such a peaceful and relaxing poem, yet filled with many emotions and a certain mystery. Great poem by a great writer.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Minnetonka Twin and Debbie,

      Thank you so much for appreciating this poem.and for the votes! Thanks!:)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      simply beautiful.. love it

      voted up

      Debbie

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Oh dear-This is so terribly sad and heart wrenching. I see the sun and moon shining upon you in the present. Beautiful writing!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi guys! I am so thrilled that you all like my poem. I have to say, I am soooo touched by your kind messages ^;^

      ShiningIrishEyes

      P10kabhijita

      Endless Sea

      Vellur

      Kashmir

      Ann

      Dexter

      Mhatter

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this beautiful poem

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      Dexter Yarbrough 5 years ago from United States

      Sad, but touching poem. Beautiful as well!

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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      US, I do believe you might have given Edgar Allen Poe a run for his money on this one except for last verse. I don't think that poor man ever found the peace that you portray so well at the end.Voted up and beautiful.

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi M. WOW this is a amazing poem, your words whisper of sadness but capture every moment perfectly !

      Vote up and more !!! SHARING !!!

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Great work. Sad but still beautifully expressed.Voted up.

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      Akhand Pratap SIngh 5 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      That is sad, but the curse will lift some one will hold your life again inside his arms, heart will beat again like a melodious charm :) Take care

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      Abhijit Aswath 5 years ago from India

      You are an amazing poet. Every word makes a strong impact. Keep it up!

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      unknown spy - Stirring, heartbreakingly beautiful and so well done. You are one talented poet.

      Love reading your works of art.

      votin gup

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much tobusiness.. and i love your 'the sun will return, the moon will shine bright and love will once again kiss the tears from your eyes' :)so lovely!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Unknown, this is beautiful and so sad.

      But, 'the sun will return, the moon will shine bright and love will once again kiss the tears from your eyes' my best wishes to you.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh! Thank you so much Articlesocean for this very nice message.

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      Saira Sheikh 5 years ago from London, United Kingdom

      Very touching poetry. Love it ! Very beautiful !