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Love And Eternity

Updated on August 17, 2012
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When there was darkness

In the corridors of mind;

And heart was knitting

the doubts of being

where the loneliness,

Hunted the songs of merriments;



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making me afraid of

shadows of life.

on the road of life.

I heard thy voice

The voice within me

The voice of love

The journey of light
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Which emerged within my sighs

As the colors in painters eyes

To create an eternal love;

Thy voice composed

An eternal song of love

And i found myself;

in an enchanted world.

where darkness was afraid of light


Listen that instrumental song to feel the depths of eternity.

My being emerged within you

As colors in water ,

And being gains the perfect harmony.

And the soul started its journey;

journey of light,towards eternity.


copyright©Asma iftikhar

16August 2012








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      Sushmita 5 years ago from Kolkata, India

      My new post uses the word Eternity, and so your poem came up on the page. You talk of love that merges with a being larger and beyond- and yet within bounds of our self. Lovely idea and expression. Enjoyed reading it, and so sharing it.

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      Thy voice composed

      An eternal song of love

      And i found myself;

      in an enchanted world.

      where darkness was afraid of light

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

      Powerful words Asma; absolutely beautiful. I loved the music you have in here. So refreshingly beautiful.

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      shruti sheshadri 5 years ago from Bangalore, India

      Beautifully written! Yes, our inner voice plays such an important role doesnt it?

      voted up!

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 5 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Beautifully expressed - the journey of life. Darkness giving way to the eternal light; this life to the life yonder.

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Asmaifikhar

      "And the soul started its journey;

      journey of light,towards eternity."

      Very vivid imagery of the transition from lie to death.

      Voted up and away

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Frank an Antonia for reading and commenting on my poem.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I think in true love we experience eternity in many ways. Lovely work!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      I like this colorful euphemism for death.. accepting the calm of the after-life.. yeah very well done asma