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Ever Return (tanka)

Updated on September 17, 2013

Will ever return

Back to the source of its spring

Whispers in shadows

Treasures of another day

Where she will find me waiting


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I do so like the duality in meaning. That must be the extra bonus.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia


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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      A simple masterpiece.

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      Cynthia B Turner 4 years ago from Georgia

      So simply and beautifully written. Cyndi

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      mmmmm..i love when you get ro-mayan-tic! lol

      (love the choker she's wearing tooooo....)


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      passionate77 4 years ago

      nice and lovely! too short but conveying the complete message, blessings mhatter99!

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      FlourishAnyway 4 years ago from USA

      Lovely work, Martin.