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Evil Potion; I'm One of Them

Updated on October 24, 2011

In a dark fogy wood, cricket sound…owls hoot…wolves howl and a strong wind blows whistling the darkly sky

“wheeeeeew” as the branch hitting one another, “click…click…click…”

Shadow of the branch waves back and fourth

Brings chills to my spine

And there I reach to the hilltop; I see the olden brick castle

Where the witches live and goblin hides

Demons whirling around the hill, ghost taken over the sky

Moonlight brighten up the sky leaving shadows of ghost wandering

“Booooooo…..” they cried leaving Goosebumps dance my skin

Witches chanting their evil potion

“Scales of dragon, tooth of wolves

Tongues of dogs and toes of frogs

Babies fingers and goat livers

Powerful evil and fangs of devil

Make the gruel thick and slab

Double,double toil and trouble,

Fire burn and cauldron bubble.”

“yeee heee heee heee heee” they cried

As the candle light glows with a bright smoky flash

My body was stone after what I saw

And a woman with dark long hair

Appeared beyond of me

Covering her face, floating toward me….I could not run nor could I hide…

She lift her head up with a sound of crack, evil dead eyes stare upon me

With magical power she lift me up off my feet and locked me by the throat

She throws me into the castle which broke the front door

“Human….” The witch says as if I was her dinner

The three witches surround me with their evil stares

Fears tempted me everywhere

They snatched me by the arm and say

“Boil her!” and throw me in their boiled potion

They scream with laughter while I’m suffering in their pot of hell

Which then I became part of them


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    • chanroth profile image

      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Derdriu, thank you! :)

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      Derdriu 6 years ago

      Chanroth: What a poignant, powerful, provocative mix of deep fears, inexorable meter and shocking tragedy! That is an absolutely overwhelming last liner!

      Thank you, voted up, etc.,


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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Ruby, thanks! :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      BOO,Scary..You spun an exciting tale..Well done.

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hello iccieve and jadedlove, thanks! :)

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      Not my kind of witch, but I must say that you captured much in your words. The evil, the death, the becoming of life within them. Beautiful.

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      icciev 6 years ago from Kuwait

      Amazing and well written, loved it. voted up