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Poem: Eyes wide shutt!

Updated on December 22, 2011

Unchained Bulls, running wild and free,

Street pastures dimmed by implosion schemes

A Nation on the brink ?

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Frank you are a poet will great drama , I am actually quite surprised , you haven't tried a dramatic Haiku as yet. But then again understanding steps in and asks me, I am? If so why?

      Thanks brethren .

      Bless

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Like Wall Street getting ready to explode I love the dramatics in so few words :)

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you Dark and lovely love the lion.Hope it is.lol

      Thanks for you kind help on this one , I actually love the style , but I keep feeling that there is more I can put. Guess it's a hard habit to break.

      I 'll stop by , feel I 'll learn something as I am doing now..

      Thanks for reading and the help comment.

      Bless.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Of course "AE" , how can some have so much almost all, while other humans have none?

      But I do believe that every form of life have it's own way of fixing itself and we are the most intelligent!

      Am hoping in every regard!

      Thanks "AE"

      Bless.

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      Annie 5 years ago from NewYork

      that all it takes.. one verse and it tell a story

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      If you're referring to the political mess we have in this nation, I agree. The rich get richer and the poor gets poorer. We said, " Yes we can in 08 and we will say it again......Keep writing..