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Flooded in My Mind : A Poem

Updated on July 5, 2017



Flooded

Full with thought

Should I admit?

This challenge is too tough?


Can I keep?

Can I stay?

If it’s only me to give

Will you turn away?


Flooded

Afraid I should back to top

When I’m not able to meet

The one I should have thought



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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Pintails. ^_^ Inshaallah, I will try my best.

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    pintails7886 7 years ago from Memphis TN

    Great poem Freya, I am so impressed by your work. I love it very much. Keep up the good work inshaa Allah. Salam Sister.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Poetlorraine. I kind of wondering, is it because this poem too to the point that's why the comments became to the point too, or simply because it is not good? :(

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    poetlorraine 7 years ago

    enjoyed the thought process

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thanks! ^_^

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Nice!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    ^_^ Thank you.

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    Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    Neat write, loved it...