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Falling (poem)

Updated on June 19, 2013

Heartbreak

Stay this moment

Of all those once where yesterdays turned black

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Teardrops

Drawn these wishes

Of fantasies whose ever never were

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Sorrow

Purge this shadow

Of echoes from another part of me

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How did we get here

What can recall

Seems mindless confusion

Has wiped out all trace

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A blame you for this

Others for that

But now these brief riches

Mean nothing at all

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Reason unravels

Love’s feelings flip

In bottomless hollow

A soul seeks a bend

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Escape

Cries some darkness

Outstretching a sole but promiseless hand

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Maybe

Comes an answer

From a voice I hadn’t heard for a while

Music only

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    • shanmarie profile image

      shanmarie 4 years ago

      I like the way it kind of changes mood slightly at the end.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Love the mystery.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Imagine that...no, I guess he can't. Sometimes it just takes that second thoiught on what might be.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      That was a very deep poem!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Mysterious and deep...

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Evocative on so many levels. Voted UP!

      Best Always,

      Kim

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very heartrending poem. Loss of love is so very painful. We must have been on the same thought patterns this day in our writings. Powerful music video too.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      rose-the planner 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      A very emotionally charged poem. Awesome! (Voted Up) -Rose

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great words and so well thought of with such emotions

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      You always write so deep and passionately; always leave me to ponder and always amazed.

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      Brandon Martin 4 years ago from Colorado, USA

      :.) Wow. A lot of meaning to this. Beautiful and sad.