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Fantasy

Updated on March 25, 2013
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Sun streaks through the night air

Snow falls in the summertime

Worlds collide

In a love affair

That merges the moonlight

With yellow rays in delight

At it's peak

A mountain of plains form

Flipped all around

Uniquely twisted

An angel's storm

Dancing all around

The otherworld becomes reality

A devil's heaven playground

Trees and roses speak in light tones

Fairies are alive

We are known as myths

Not real

We are just there

Trying to survive

Fantasies become reality

All is an illusion

We are run like a show

The earth is a globe

In a child's mind

A dolphin's fin

In the world below

Everyone is a celebrity

Admired by all

Riding on pegasus

In an ocean of air

The sky a watery cove

A mermaid's delight

Nothing is as it seems

A stitch on a blanket

A giant's hair

Reflections in a mirror

Pools streaming

Amidst fireworks

Castles in the sky

Conscious dreams

Showing us reality

Where we can fly

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you very much Raciniwa! :)

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      this is marvelous caroline...mythical and rapturous...

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Jim thanks so much. You flatter me! :)

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      What a charming poem, Caroline, this one is going down as one of my favorites. BTW, you have your own file (106 entries) in my computer.

      Jim

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Mc thanks for your comment. :)

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Shimmering thank you! :)

      @ Hi Rob thank you! :)

      @ Girltalksshop thank you! :)

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      I'll just sit on this toadstool and watch the procession.

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      girltalksshop 5 years ago

      I love fantasy...especially ones written so well, as this one is. : ) Voted up and interesting!! Thanks for the dreaming delight of what could be, at least in ones imagination.

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      Rob 5 years ago from Bay Ridge Brooklyn NY

      Hi caroline; Very nicely phrased and well described. Fantasy is an important part of life. The pictures you chose added to the feel of it.

      Well done,

      Rob

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      shimmering Dawn 5 years ago

      Oh wow this is indeed magical. Stunning! Have a blessed day.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Lady E thank you for your kind words. Don't worry about the name. LOL. :)

      @ Hi Curiad thank you!

      @ Hi Frank thank you! :)

      @ Hi Gypsy thank you!

      @ Hi Cheryl thank you!

      @ The Frog glad you liked. Thanks!

      @ Hi Vinaya thank you for all of your kind words!

      @ Hi Blossom thank you kind lady!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A great imagination and vividly beautiful.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      "All is an illusion

      We are run like a show"

      these lines are so powerful.

      I loved your poetry, philosophical yet emotionally charged.

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      The Frog Prince 5 years ago from Arlington, TX

      I came, I read and I liked it.

      The Frog

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      Cheryl Simonds 5 years ago from Connecticut

      I like this one a lot. Very poetic and beautiful. Love the pictures as well.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome thanks Caroline for this mystic fairy tale.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Caroline this was amazing.. I love your style :) Frank

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      This is beautiful Caroline!

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Caroline

      This is a beautiful poem and has a magical tone to it.

      The photos are lovely too.

      Ps. I apologise for the first comment. I got the name mixed up with someone else.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Thanks Billy. :)

      @ Hi Aim thanks for your kind words. :)

      @ Hi Michael yes I know you love fantasies! Thanks for reading!

      @ Hi Katrine thank you for stopping by!

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      What an amazing fantasy it is Caroline, I got lost in time reading it. Beautiful :-)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline , you have captured fantasy with words. Very well done. For you above all know that I live for fantasy.!!! great hub, you gorgeous woman.

      Love ya,

      Michael

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      Daniel Austhof 5 years ago from West Michigan

      Beautifully described. So vivid it almost brings me straight to lucid dream mode!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Billy you're comments are always so inspiring. Thank you.

      @ Hi Tammy thank you!

      @ Hi Ruby thanks so much!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Mystical, magic...Loved it..This is truly a fantasy...

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      This is stunningly creative. Beautiful!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      "Showing us reality where we can fly." That is a beautiful line from a talented writer. Excellent and a beautiful way for me to start my day.