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Feeling The Beginning of the End

Updated on July 23, 2012

Oh how I despise the bitter sting

Of when I suddenly feel

The beginning of the end

The start of a final scene

That is destined to drag on

And hurt me

And confuse me

And eventually change me

Because someone has to change

Before the credits will roll

And it won't be the other person

Because it never is

And it won't be the situation

Because it never does

But there will be a sequel

With new characters

And new places

And a very different ending


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      Kara Monterey 5 years ago from Indianapolis

      The Famous Final Scene is a great song! Thanks for the compliments everyone:) I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem.

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      thost 5 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Nice poem with a nice feel. Well done.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very interesting, everyday is a new beginning..Lovely poetry..

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Fantastic. Says it all. Reminded me of the song by Bob Seger The Famous Final Scene.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      good poem. it happens. some couples see what others can't. thanks

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      Kara Monterey 5 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks for all the kind words!!

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      She is so strong.

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      Alan R Lancaster 5 years ago from Forest Gate, London E7, U K (ex-pat Yorkshire)

      Go-get-'em (Plenty more fish in the sea)! Nice piece of creative mood, thumbs up!

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      A new beginning is the best. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      You have highlighted a universal truth, very interesting. Well penned.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Creative and true to life. Isn't it great that we can look forward to a new scene.

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      Derrick Bennett 5 years ago

      Can relate to this peom? Do have any more work?

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      These words are so true, and when these things happen we can only look forward to a new beginning. The important thing to know is that it all leads to something beautiful in the end.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      What a thought provoking concept..... Of life! Beautiful......

      Voting up

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      full of emotion......very nicely woven poem.

      Voting up and sharing too:-)