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Few ruins of long ago….the poem

Updated on May 23, 2013
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Dead is the mind long ago

And the memoirs do cripple

With time driving the destiny,

Fade is the grind long ago

And the tidal waves do nibble

Never the less heart’s a scrutiny.

*

Heady was the concoction

Three portions of smiles

With four lighter shades of tears,

And here is the proportion

Of some melancholy cries

No lures competes the fears.

*

A rolling stone of time eternal

Illusion of reality fractional

Heart is in a numb coma to forgo,

A fooling mind to feel barren

Retention of brutality haven

Dearth does heal the dead torso.

*

A night is sleeping under the crave

And a dream is distant delusion

Cloudless sky is savouring the wind,

Stars do weave a wave of heart rave

And a whim of crescent pollution

The unspoken noises often grind.

*

Silence is deep around

To flow within the soul

So many meanings and so many sayings,

Eyes speak without word

To glow in our hearts

Lot many more warmth and passions.

*

A dead mind is left behind

To talk in silence

To cry alone with wind filled with a river,

To pour some concoction

With eyes filled with your credence

Let be an edgy destiny unfurl the crux forever.

*

Some wind… long ago

Few cloudless skies…. long ago

Lots of warmth in silence…. long ago

Many passions aglow yet unspoken… long ago

I, Me, Mine, Myself now no more

….A concoction of reality was there long ago.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A wonderfully written and thought of poem so much of goodness.

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      manatita44 4 years ago from london

      Excellent poem. Great way of conveying past experiences.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Amazing poem with profound reflection.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      So profound and beautifully written .It is really a thought-provoking poem.Thanks for sharing.Voted up

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing those beautiful thoughts!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks to all my friends out here .......

      DDE

      manatita

      Faith Reaper

      James-wolve

      kidscrafts

      For your wonderful comments and precious time here. I am much honored and glad that you all have liked and supported my work. Thanks again...God bless you all

      Deergha

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      Nellieanna Hay 4 years ago from TEXAS

      Underlying a beautifully written melody of words, one senses deep loss or sorrow, with profound understanding.

      Your phrases are truly magnificent. This one grabs me, especially:

      ". . . A rolling stone of time eternal

      Illusion of reality fractional. . . " So perceptive, 'reality fractional". Yes, perhaps that's IT, or part of it.

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      A really beautiful poem here, Nellieanna is right!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Nellieanna....I am honored ....Glad that you have liked dis one....God bless you and take care

      deergha

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      Many thanks@xstatic...I am truly touched....god bless you always

      deergha

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Gorgeous words woven to create a deep, almost melancholy song of a past remembered..

      memories are such a double edged sword!

      absolutely beautiful, Deergha

      sharing on

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Beautifully expressed and a haunting of long ago when our past remains part of what we are today.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Leslie......You are absolutely rite like always...i do feel happy as the way you can relate with my work....Thank you dear.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Dear BlossomSB...many thanks for your time here....God bless you

      deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This was some poetic cocktail. Imaginative. Passing this on.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Gypsy....Many thanks for your gracious visit and shares here. Take care and God bless you always

      deergha

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very reflective script. Beautifully written!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      It is amazing how much the past holds, yet we always manage to recall exactly how we felt. Excellent work!

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully expressed, great poem. Voted up.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      wayne barett....thank you for your time here.

      aviannovice.....I am glad that you have liked this work here.

      Vellur.....your visit and votes are much appreciated.

      God bless you all my friends here

      deergha

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      thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Great work here, so nice to read. Well done.

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @thost for your time here...God bless you

      deergha

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