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Where Iife stands! and what is my stance?

Updated on October 24, 2011

Hope

Hope
Hope

Blind Folded

Where Life stands! and what is my stance?

Screams inside me? exposed me at last

I thought I was alive ,as my heart beats are live

Now my heart, beats me hard by making me realize

That heart is not life even still alive,

Where Life stands! and what is my stance?

I thought of happiness is to answering desires,

One after the other, like models who put the ramp on fire,

Lips making a curve angle, me waiting for an angel!

Loops of my desires ,creates so much pressure

I can‘t feel pleasure, I can’t feel pleasure

Where Life stands and what is my stance !

I thought of a beauty, as harmony of appearance

Too many of affairs ever ready to appear!

Now I want to disappear, as I lost my flair!

What beauty really is ? I don’t want to think of it !

Where Life stands! and what is my stance?

Am I drawing conclusion ,or this is a illusion

I wanna know the reality,without feeling anxiety !

Oh God Oh God give me a chance ,,,

And Clear me, my stance….

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      Deeply anguished; it expresses the thoughts in a clear fluidity. Well done.

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      shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Shanaya/Vianasya

      This really mean a lot to me .

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      shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      Hello Shobis! First of all a Grand Welcome to the Hub world. Let me tell you that your Poem has very Deep meaning. Amazing. You should keep writing & don't be stop here. My best wishes are with you.:)

      voted up, Awesome, Interesting, Beautiful.

      With lots of Respect

      from SHANAYA:)

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      vianasya 5 years ago from Indonesia

      Great poetry you have here, shobish! I like the picture and mostly your writing. Good work. Looking forward to see more from you :)

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      shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Rosemay

      Looking forward for an audio file :)

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A very deep write. I tended to read ths in hip hop style.

      Welcome to the Hub

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      shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks MM

      This is my first writing .Feedback about this will really help me to continue writing or not.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Very powerful, expressive writing, welcome to Hub Pages, best wishes MM