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Updated on April 18, 2012

They arrived at his stately home in the mountains, the air was so fresh after a small storm had passed and left a smell of dampness in the air. Adriana was a little apprehensive about going to his home, because she had not known him that long. Just having met him a week ago, quite by accident when they bumped into each other at the library.

Adriana was coming around the corner with her head in a book as usual, when she was startled by his large frame. She looked up and there was this handsome man, with dark hair and and large shoulders that looked like they could hold the world on them. The most amazing thing about him that Adriana noticed was his eyes. They seemed to look right through her, straight into her soul. At first she thought they sparkled when she first looked into his eyes, but said to herself, no, it was just my imagination. But she knew there was something different about him, something she could not put her finger on.

After he had introduced himself as Michael, it did not seem important, that she didn't ask for his last name and he never offered it. All she knew was that she had to get to know this man, to find out how, he all of a sudden had this power over her to make her want to be with him. Adriana knew that when she looked into his eyes she felt so warm inside. She had been with boys, from the college she attended, but this was different, this was a man. After some small talk between them that included words of which she felt was all about her.

Adriana never noticed that Michael almost knew more about her than she had told him. Michael talked like he had been around for centuries, he knew all the great authors, all the best poets, and could quote them like he had talked to them himself, long ago. Adriana only knew that when he looked into his eyes, all she could hear was that small voice telling her, that she had to have this man for her own. That voice eerily sounded like his voice.

The following day, Adriana was still not surprised when Michael showed up at her school. He said that he had been talking to a few professors that he knew from his college days. She never asked him when he had gone to college here, but it only seemed to pass by in the conversation because she was so happy to see him again, Thats when, Michael asked her to go out with him. Although he knew she would say yes, Adriana tried to play coy. Michael waited with the patience of a thousand years. It was only after she said yes, that Adriana again thought, she had seen a sparkle in his eyes. Adriana this time felt like she could not turn him down like there was a power that compelled her to say yes.

Adriana was in the bedroom that night after her homework was done and put away, with Michael's eyes on her mind. They had this effect on her that she had started to notice. While she brushed her long blonde hair and stared into the mirror, just after having taken a hot bath and had changed into her night gown, she thought that she heard a sound from outside her window. As she turned to look, she heard talking, it was not from outside but it seemed to come from inside her head, like someone was whispering into her ear. The voice was calling her name, but it was like nothing Adriana had ever heard. Adriana actually thought for a moment, Michael was calling her name. It was so soft and tender she almost answered him.

Adriana awoke with a start and saw Michael standing next to the bed. She looked up at him and heard him say shhhhhh...... but the words did not come out of his mouth . She had no sense of fear, only this feeling of passion that was coming from her body. A feeling of warmth and desire that was unbearable, Adriana was under a spell of lustful emotion that she felt overpower her. She pulled the covers back to show him her naked desire, to tell him, take me my darling,, she heard herself say, I am yours. But, Adriana did not notice that the words did not come out of her mouth. It was her thoughts, they seemed to talk through communication from the mind. Michael bent down to her and his strong hand touched her oh so gently, so softly, it was like a feather stroking her skin. Adriana could not move, as she felt a passion welling up in her groin. She was starting to have an orgasmic spasm as the closer Michael got to her naked body she felt such a feeling of warmth, a feeling of need that was unbearable, she felt that she must give in to this feeling, for it was overwhelming all her senses. Then just as Michael's lips were so close to her that she could feel his hot sweet breath on her neck, Adriana awoke. She was covered with sweat and her night gown was drenched. She looked around the room but it was quiet. Wow, she thought , what a dream. It must have just been the thought of going out on her date with Michael tommorow, she could not wait.


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    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Tillie, thanks you are the first one who got it right away!

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      Move over Twilight and 50 Shades of Gray, Michael's here!

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      Andee Rose Carpenter 5 years ago from Past the sunrise, left of the moon

      Ooh! What a titillating bit of romantic writing! Cannot wait till the next one!

      Did you know that you could put it in a group and the site will link all the chapters together? This will make it easier for your readers to go to each chapter... Just a thought.

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      daisyflowrs 5 years ago from Richmond, VA

      I wish I could find a man that had eyes that could see straight through to my soul. Yes, I have read the chapters. My homework will be to leave you feedback. Will the feedback be good? Will it be understood? I am going to live vicariously through these chapters if you please. This is great!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raci, thanks for the visit. I like your coomments.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, what a tease you are Michael...i was really thinking of the Twilight ala Michael's version of the story...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ann, thank you for a fabulous compliment. your support is greatly appreciated. You keep giving me feed back like that and I will find you and marry you.LOL

      Love ya,


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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      You write better prose than poetry. I believe you will write a great romantic book someday. You make it interesting. Write on!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Eddi, thank you for the support. your visit is appreciated

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Truly beautiful Michael and I must award my Up up and away.

      Take care my friend and I wish you a wonderful day.


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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Laura, finally, Laura has visited my hub.!!!!! my lovely you like my haunting tale of romance and intrigue? There is more to come, sex and video's. LOL no not really.

      Thanks for the read my lovely .

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      laurathegentleman 5 years ago from Chapel Hill, NC

      A hauntingly real story... Romantic and inspiring...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Bobbi, thank you for your comment. i am in the process now, thanks for reading.



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      PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida


      Titillating and you have our attention. That was a great chapter one.

      Waiting for more,

      Your Hub Friend,


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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruby, thank youfor your reading my work. your support is appreciated. next chapter coming soon.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wooah, Great erotic write. Coming back for the next chapter...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine, Thank you for reading my write. Yes, i plan to go on. your support is always looked for and appreciated.

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      You do know that I'm waiting for the second part, don't you? Like many others.

      I did like this bit very much..."large shoulders that looked like they could hold the world on them"...keep the story coming! *winks*

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      Whew. . . you wicked, wicked thing! When things really started to heat up, you let her wake up from her erotic dream, and sent me in to a cold shower!! That's not fair!! Anyway, it was wonderful and took my breath away as long as it lasted. . . lol. . .

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Oh it's beautiful Michael, you have kept me glued to my chair till the last word...That was a lovely dream indeed. Hope the real thing will be even better. Is this to be continued...?