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Flatten by Aluminum

Updated on December 18, 2011

What day is this that made my heart tremble
Like leech I attached myself to the ground
After a car accident that nearly took my life

Cold, sore, and heart pounding out of rhythm,
My car race with the wind in opposite direction,
Screeching sounds the cement

And my tire smoke the street as it come to a stop
Hitting another car and roll off the street
I thought I'll fall to my death and be flatten by aluminum

Cold tears walked my eyes
Drooling slowly in the corner caressing my cheek
As my body shaken by fear

Slowly I open the door to my Gold Honda Civic Lx 2005 car
I walked out quivering like a baby who first learned to walked
I fell completely down hitting the pavement as a gentleman came asking if I'm alright

Than a voice I heard buzzing in my ear..."Honey...sweetheart..."
A voice I followed through a bright light
I woke up in my bedroom and realized everything was just a dream


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    • chanroth profile image

      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Deborah, Ghaelach, Gypsy and raciniwa, thank you! Merry Christmas and Happy holiday! I wish you all the best and lots of warm hugs from afar! :)

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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, i was starting to think how are you...thank heavens it's just a dream...but be careful might be a premonition...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      I hate such awful dreams but they happen.

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      Ghaelach 6 years ago

      Morning Chanroth.

      Awesome. I'm truely glad this was just a dream or hub.

      Accidents like your dream happen far to often and at this time of the year with christmas in your heart and ice on the roads they make a bad combination.


      Take care Chanroth.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Great story.. Love the ending.. I voted up and awesome