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Flickering Flames

Updated on February 16, 2013

Trying to feel the heat...
from the passion lost
how do you warm a cold heart...
frozen and stiff
waitng for the words,
that will come from your lips

So softly, a cold snow...
envelops my soul
covering ... like a blanket
smothering the last breath...
as I gasp... for my own life

When love has left
with no tracks to follow,
gone... down the lonely road
of lost dreams

wandering to nowhere...
with no direction,
stumbling...
found...looking over the edge of blackness

Step back and remember when...
all was beautiful, all was bright
in my mind
the warmth... what a feeling
from your flickering flames,
of true love

I look into the fire...

the reflections...so strong
I see your heart
waiting for me there...

always

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @Faith Reaper, loyal friend and poet, you are tireless in your devotion and effort to visit and comment on many hubs. you are a special person and and a wonderful human being.

      God Bless you ...

      Michael

      @torrilynn, thank you for the visit and the kind words on my work .

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      torrilynn 5 years ago

      Hi cleaner3,

      thanks for this hub

      the way that you articulate your words

      and are able to organize them is quite striking

      voted up

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, this is such a lovely read, the passion that was once there, and still feeling the heat of such days since gone. Really love that line . . ."I see your heart waiting for me there." Such a strong desire for that flicker to become a flame once again.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless. Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Rochelle .

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      Very passionate and it's a great poem :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you teaches .. for the comment.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Thank you for a look into the heart of the flame. Keep hopeful and strong in your relationships!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Jackie for the visit and the kind comments .. i am humbled.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Really beautiful and your words are the visual pleasure; which needs no rhyme.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the visit .. Nikki .. great comment !

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      all in due time... lol

    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Nikki.. glad to see you ..

      waiting for that finish to your story .. ha,ha,

    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Rosemay .. i see what you mean about the rhyme..

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      really liked it and can relate. if it is true love then it will always find a way back to you, and the heart will always heal, even if it doesnt. Like a pheonix rising up from the ashes.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      This is beautiful Michael. Sometimes rhyming takes away from the emotions, you did a wonderful job

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thanks hatter .. you are the man

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Yes, yes, yes... well done. Congratulations and thank you.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      dghbrh, thank you for the kind words ..

      this is one of the few poems i have written without a rhyme scheme so I am very happy you liked it .

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      So beautifully done this one is! The love lost yet such passion left inside which is most difficult to let go even when one knows that there is no footprints to follow......so deep and so moving. You are really amazing here .....

      '.....I look into the fire...

      the reflections...so strong

      I see your heart

      waiting for me there...

      always"

      Bravo !!!!!

    • dghbrh profile image

      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      So beautifully done this one is! The love lost yet such passion left inside which is most difficult to let go even when one knows that there is no footprints to follow......so deep and so moving. You are really amazing here .....

      '.....I look into the fire...

      the reflections...so strong

      I see your heart

      waiting for me there...

      always"

      Bravo !!!!!

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