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Liquid Gold

Updated on March 3, 2011
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Like liquid gold your words flow...
They seer and, thus, inspire
this heart, rendered defenseless,
to caress of your desire.

Like liquid gold, your words flow...
sweet intoxicating wine
that renders this heart powerless,
in star-struck state of mind.

Like liquid gold, your words flow...
spill into a hungry heart...
captured by the essence of
a bliss it can't impart.

Like liquid, gold your words flow...
that seer and so inspire
this heart rendered defenseless
to succumb to your desire.

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      Marina Lester 6 years ago

      Awesome!!!! Candle light desire, perfectly written! :D

      "to succumb to your desire." ... hmm, very nice.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Aha,Golden you are.Loved it.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      geoffbot, I am thrilled! Thanks so much for stopping and for the awesome comment!

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      geoffbot 6 years ago from costa rica

      I really like this piece. I love it actually.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      dianeaugust, thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it and commented. It means so much!

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      dianeaugust 6 years ago from Tennessee

      Liquid Gold so beautifully said. I love that metaphor--it feels warm and rich and like love--it feels like love. Thank you for these words so well written, so poetic, so true!