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Folio of a bottled dream – a poem

Updated on October 7, 2013
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Crystal sands of life

In heaps were thy words to steal some odd tears….

Blue lagoon was those dreams besides

And again…some blues of sky afar

Picture perfect was against the bottled back drop

A dream in a folio nostalgic

Bound by the string of passion crave

Words to flow within

Sentences to fly yearnings

Yet some cantos to drive longings

Wishes dive in whirlpools of imaginations rave

I allowed them to be with free wings to fly

Some folios bound with a string of passion

Bottled up were my emotions

Do I have a sky to be free?

Or a blue dream to dive in deep…

Swim across the lagoon of desire

Shades of emotions…

Yet some mysterious revisions…

A wish to touch your heart within…

A desire to reach your soul deep within…

Love is heaps of tailored emotion…

Hustle in the lagoon of imagination…

So be it….

Till dreams can be bottled up…

Words to speak volumes…

Without been free to mean

It’s a safe game of sea and sand..

Waves do kiss the crystal mend…

Never to wipe away those nostalgic bend…

Emotions to be immortal in the folio of heart

Bound in the string of forgotten hurt…

Corked up the tears…. for they better learn to act…

To act to be happy and warm…

In the empty blue lagoon

Of dream to dazzle in a drama of life………..

Yes it’s a crocked bottle of promise to be life enough….

In the Crystal sands of heaped emotions!!!!

Let a bottle of emotion drink till it no more feels!!!!!!!!

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dearest Faith............Many thanks for you made your time to stop by and leave your valuable comment. Votes and shares are much appreciated. Yeah that I see, Romeo is very much talented and he almost plays with words....and I am honored but I am far tooo much away even just to think about his style of writing. Thank you anyways....Take care And God bless you always

      deergha

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, deergha, this is beautiful and profound as to bottled dreams! I just love Romeos' comment and agree. He is a master of words too, just as you!

      Up and more and sharing

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you very much.....R Q,

      Your words are precious. And let the pains feel the pain inside till it can at least feel.

      Take care

      God bless you many smiles ahead

      regards,

      deergha

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      If the bottle is one's heart, resting on the sands of life, with the scroll being the emotional contents, bearing passion, its dreams and imagination, bound by the cord of previous pain(s) thereof, will it ( the heart ), ever truly achieve its dream, or sadly, destined to be frivolously tossed about aimlessly, upon the crests of its own yearnings, never to partake of its bounty?

      If the scroll, or folio of the heart becomes drunk on its own emotions, rendering it numb, should it ever acheive its dream, or must it be uncorked, so the message of one's folio be soaked within the distant lagoon of that dream to feel complete?

      An interesting poem, but perhaps only its esteemed author will be the only one to unlock its complete content.

      Have a wonderful evening Deergha;

      Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you so much for your kind comment and visit here. I am happy and you are very kind....dear friend Deb:-)

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I will take that bottled dream and it can show how it parallels my own. Very well done!

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Prasetio...Thank you for making your time to stop by and leave your comment here. Your votes are also appreciated for. Take care

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      prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Wonderful poem, I love it. Thanks for sharing with us. Beautiful dream for me. VOTED UP :-)

      Prasetio

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you for your wonderful inspiration to go for a life time here. God bless

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful words that bring wonderful dreams.

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

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      Many thanks all my friends out there...for your wonderful and inspiring words...God bless you all

      deergha

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Well written and enjoyable to read, thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Folio of a bottled dream – a poem a lovely photo and a beautifully written poem.

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Corked up the tears…. for they better learn to act…

      To act to be happy and warm…

      In the empty blue lagoon

      Of dream to dazzle in a drama of life………..

      Loved it and voted up.

      Enjoy your day dghrbrh.

      Eddy.

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      Rayne123 3 years ago

      Beautiful and great words

      Your writing is awesome

      Your poetry is stories

      Blessings

      Laurie

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      kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry, Deergha! I love your choice of picture with the bottle and the message lying in the sand by the side of the sea :-)

      Have a fantastic week!