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Follow the Reaper ~Dark Days

Updated on September 10, 2009

Maybe somewhere in time someone would make this a song~ That's my dream

Oh I dreamt in agony that I died last night as the moon rose

I felt its cold sensation of damnation prey on my heart so close

The sickness churning through my stomach, so  Painstaking

The dark suffocating the remaining shreds of life, so tormenting

Chorus 1 :

Come and rescue me, I’m burning can’t you see?

Won’t you give me your hand and set me free?

Or are you going to savor my pain

And enjoy seeing me grow insane?

Can you hear my cries echo in the empty night

Do you know away to take the pain away and make it right

Can’t you feel my endless pain charge through the electric air?

Can’t you see that going through this alone is so unfair?*


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Death’s claws running down my spine plunging through my heart

Tossing my dead fragile body like cards, ripping the flesh apart

Excruciating agony echoes up and down my breakable knees

A lonely gasp for air in order to breath I can not seize


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*Chorus 2*

Caught in the middle between life and death

Would you lend me one single crucial breath

Or can you be merciful and silence forever the ache

Death! Kill me fast or drive through my heart a stake

Cause I can’t hold on and ignore the pain no more

Can’t you see my body’s batted up and my soul is sore*

My shrieks are caught up in my throat only to antagonize the situation

Falling ashes from pain, can’t handle anymore all the mutilation

Death savors my desperate cries which I raise to the darkened sky

Which watches pleased as I stare in distress to the ceiling up high

Claws, digging through my chest ripping through the crimson hole

Driving its claymore for fingers reaching out for my scared soul

Chorus 1

Come and rescue me, I’m burning can’t you see?

Won’t you give me your hand and set me free?

Or are you going to savor my pain

And enjoy seeing me grow insane?

Can you hear my cries echo in the empty night

Do you know away to take the pain away and make it right

Can’t you feel my endless pain charge through the electric air?

Can’t you see that going through this alone is so unfair?*

I plead a thousand times to escape death’s hell

I begged to be saved from its torturing spell

I try effortlessly to yank free the think mist smothers my cries

Death’s claw’s settle on my pale skin laying its fingers on my eyes

My blood pounding in my ears; Life is all tears and pain

No freedom no peace, Misery and death is all what we gain

Chorus 1 &2

Come and rescue me, I’m burning can’t you see?

Won’t you give me your hand and set me free?

Or are you going to savor my pain

And enjoy seeing me grow insane?

Can you hear my cries echo in the empty night?

Do you know away to take the pain away and make it right

Can’t you feel my endless pain charge through the electric air?

Can’t you see that going through this alone is so unfair?*

Or can you be merciful and silence forever the ache

Death! Kill me fast or drive through my heart a stake

Cause I can’t hold on and ignore the pain no more

Can’t you see my body’s batted up and my soul is sore *

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    • Uriel profile imageAUTHOR

      Uriel 

      7 years ago from Lebanon

      WOW thanglynn07, i never thought of disturbed, but that would be awesome if they sang it [fingers crossed hehehe, Dream big ha?:P] thank you for your support and Yeh why not i wouldn't mind you singing back up or singing the whole thing it would be an honor ! :D:D

      have a great day

    • thanglynn07 profile image

      thanglynn07 

      9 years ago from Long Beach, CA

      Wow. This definitely can be a song! Perhaps sung by David Draiman of Disturbed! I loved it! The pain in this poem you have well expressed! You've captured the very essence of pain itself. The torture of cruelty as if your very soul the flames have swallowed! I absolutely loved it! Perhaps I can sing back-up lol.

    • Uriel profile imageAUTHOR

      Uriel 

      9 years ago from Lebanon

      Invictus, Thank you so much, it means a lot . :D i feel like at home

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      9 years ago

      You are such an amazing poet, dear Uriel! So passionately expressive!

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