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Elemental, Malleable, and Indivisible a Spiritual being

Updated on January 29, 2013

Do you really know Me?

Leave me be

for I am elemental

Let me ride on my galactic surf board

Riding the high tides on Solar winds of a near by Star



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A Timeless ruby I am not

My laser beams burn the retina though

I am beyond the sediments that crystallize to form diamonds

My eyes are like invisible prisms of light so undefined

Until seen when it breaks through particular mediums


By fdecomite
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They compared me to the Titans who clashed with Gods

Even Zeus wasn't my predecessor he was actually my child I gave birth to him

The chambers that contain me are neither of flesh nor antimatter

Fragments of earth were crafted by my toxic waste I excrete into the universe



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My legs aren't legs at all they're door ways through dimensions

I drool every once in a while and they call it water

This primitive man with his obnoxious scientific thinking he can't out smart me

For I am elemental, malleable and indivisible



By Wonderlane
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Creator of creatures, deity of all deities

They classified me as inert Gas

but that's not quite exact

My life line is infinite who can absorb forms and facts



By Wonderlane
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So, Who created me?

I created myself

Helium Hydrogen Oxygen Carbon and Nitrogen all try to mimic my existence

They forged an all out battle to defeat my presence but they lose every time



By Wonderlane
By Wonderlane | Source

Mankind has one thing correct though, there's only one of me

For I am pure Creativity The God of life Art

Defender of the entire galaxy, creator of all the milky ways, soul controller of it all

Absolutely Elemental! and you simply need to accept that



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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, this is amazing and wonderful!!! Beyond creative is your brain no doubt! Excellent piece. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      AN INTERESTING WORK AND VERY IMAGINATIVE. I LIKE YOUR PERSPECTIVE.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Thanks @Faith Reaper, I just tried to let it all go with this one, and imagine as if I was on the elemental status of life itself.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      @whonunuwho, Thanks for your cool comment it was truly fun to write it, oh yes indeed.

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      Russ Moran 4 years ago from Long Island, New York

      Thank you for sharing your wonderful creative process at work.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Thanks @rfmoran, creativity is oh so cool, ain't it!

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      KDuBarry03 4 years ago

      Very intense piece of creativity. :)

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      @KDuBarry03, thanks dude your to cool man.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and interesting. Shows an imaginative and creative mind at work. Well done Mike. passing this on.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Thank you so much @Gypsy Rose Lee, for voting for my poem here, I tried to put a uniquely different twist to poetry writing with this one, and I just hope that I can muster up enough motivation to keep up this sort of style of writing. Oh and Thanks for sharing it as well.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Odd, but I never saw this one Mike! I have been with you for quite a few months now, and I have to tell you, that poetry may be your strongest genre when it comes to writing. There is a special energy to your poems; there is beauty and deep meaning and truth in your poems....I really like this one, buddy. Thank you!

      bill

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Very expressive. I love your artistic view of life and creativity.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Thank brother, your so funny Bill and I thank you for supporting my online efforts here and elsewhere bro.

      I do indeed try my best to infuse all of my imaginative powers that I can into my poetry writings, and so yup I guess it works out in some pretty weird ways at times.

      I just wish the online world could give more praise to uniquely written poetry for all poets worldwide and much more then they are doing today, but its all good you know Bill I write poetry here to set my mind free, and not for the money.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      @teaches12345, Thank you so very much for taking the time to read this poem of mine, I did my very best on it all, and hope more folks can find it of interest to them as well.

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