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For Rent

Updated on September 10, 2010

There the floors are all sticky
and the walls are all filthy ,
In there roaches
eat better than kings.
The dust brings deadly
choking upon entering ,
And the smell well it’s
ghastly and gut-wrenching,
And its interior fits scene’s of death from
Low budget b-rated horror movies.
But this is where the many once lay
They the many happy with decay
They that wallow in self pity
and curse out their own days.
But they still choose to continue
Carrying out in their way’s
Their trash is to their ceilings and
it fills out all true meaning
Go there cleanse and make a new !
For the next lazed creatures
To move in and spin out the
Delightfully dirty webs.

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      Danny Lee Graham 6 years ago from Zephyr ,Texas , near Brownwood ,Texas

      Very good word pic ,

      you are awesome , O , Awful poet !

      And , I hope that you know-it !

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Most Obliged~

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      poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      Great imagery here. I suddenly feel the need to do some magor cleaning!

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad you enjoyed it.

      Now go and clean ~

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, where,s my cleaning material, mop, broom, dusting cloth, spray, water hose, clorox, you get the picture. I enjoyed your adaption of filth. Well done.

      Cheers

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      What's that scent,

      From these rooms for rent?

      No matter where I roam,

      This will be my home.

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      I have anosmia

      So I would not know~

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