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For the Misfortunate Lovers

Updated on February 27, 2017

Endings start with you

You said nothing has changed
You said you still looked at me like the first time we met
I believed in everything you said
But why is it something's missing?

I remembered how we used to be
and it pains me to see that everything is fading
Changes that I never want to happen with you
But how come we have reached this point?

Can I still fix things?
Can we still go back to the things we used to do?
The way you looked at me
And the way you felt about me

It hurts seeing you changing
It pains to understand why you are leaving
I can not understand any of these things
I want to know why these are happening

You suddenly changed, everything was cold
I gave everything you want
Im willing to hold back my pride, my ego
I can lose everything, just to keep you in my life.

I remembered how you used to talk to me everyday
That strange feeling you felt when i first held you
Our first kiss, everything was perfect
You were so inlove back then

I felt how happy you were when we were together
That excitement you felt knowing that we'll soon be together
But how come there's coldness in your eyes
Your eyes dont sparkle as they used to

I still want you and will always be
Im still hoping that things will be back together
The way you looked at me and the way you treat me.
Cause i'll be loving you like i will always be.


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    • Vanessaaaa profile image

      Vanessaaaa 14 months ago

      Thank you! :)

    • Ashish Dadgaa profile image

      Ashi 14 months ago


      Very nicely written poem.

      I liked the utilization of each words. Every stanza very nicely synced.

      Good work.

      Welcome to HubPages.

      Good Luck