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Updated on June 2, 2017
Foreshadowing indicates evil , crippled future.
Foreshadowing indicates evil , crippled future.

Unbiased god

has kept aside,

the ‘drastic fate’

I’m bound to abide.

I don’t know what

the future does hold.

Maybe crippling

or bright and bold.

How this uncertainty

shears my soul,

playing the devil’s

evil role.

All I can do

is search about,

or helplessly drown

in endless doubt.

The black clouds,

the stormy rain,

all foreshadow my life

to be filled with pain.

The scar in my heart

bloody and deep,

plundering my precious

whole night’s sleep.

My heart’s desire is now

full of strife,

hammering incessantly

smashing my life.

With my powers

and fore-eyes I see.

Sorrow will arrive

or life will be in glee.

I feel like running

deep in the wild.

Behaving frantically,

whining like a child.

I feel as if

in tears I sink .

My grave , sad days

that’s all I can think.

Foreshadowing hints

my painful start,

like a dark shadow ,

it eclipses my life.

My foresight and instinct ,

constantly indicate,

my upcoming, pitiable

worn out state.

The wolf’s shrill call

or dark , gloomy night,

the cat’s unbroken cry

all foreshadow my plight.

Wherever I stay

or out I go.

My stabbing thoughts

just bring me low.

For my hard thoughts

and foreshadowing,

in deplorable suspicion

whole day I swing.



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    • Debangee Mandal profile imageAUTHOR


      16 months ago from India

      Thank you Bill sir for your generous approach. It is appreciable.

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      Bill Holland 

      16 months ago from Olympia, WA

      A very spooky place to be in, real or imaginative...dark, gloomy, spooky, tingling with fear. Beautifully written!

    • Debangee Mandal profile imageAUTHOR


      16 months ago from India

      Truly a good way out Elijah sir...Lord Buddhas words are magical . Any one who can follow it can overcome all sorrow and evil thoughts. It is wonderful of you to share this message.

      Thank you for the kind comment.

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      Elijah A Alexander Jr 

      16 months ago from Washington DC

      I understand that train of thinking, we all have/will in this or other incarnations especially since that is always around us in some form.

      I have now escaped it by recognizing reincarnation as the ultimate truth concerning life on earth. What I did was what the Buddha did, left the comforts of civilization and entered the self-reproducing environment questioning it to explain to me where there are so many opposing factors. What it said to me was become objective, participate in this environment as a part of it for discovering various outcomes, a left, right and middle it proved to exist, then reason with the various outcomes and see if you can explain it to others. By following those instructions I was revealed life is endless, we are the life-force and the various bodies we incarnate as are to teach us the full extent of what the physical manifestations are about.

      May you find such peace.

    • Debangee Mandal profile imageAUTHOR


      16 months ago from India

      Thank you Manatita and Diana for your generous comments.

    • Debangee Mandal profile imageAUTHOR


      16 months ago from India

      Thank you Tamara for your kind words . Have a good day.

    • Debangee Mandal profile imageAUTHOR


      16 months ago from India

      Thanks Hari..

      Your comment itself is so rhythmic and beautiful.

      Have a good day

    • Debangee Mandal profile imageAUTHOR


      16 months ago from India


      I am glad that you came across and commented. Have a good day.

    • Debangee Mandal profile imageAUTHOR


      16 months ago from India

      Thank you three keys for your wonderful comment.I am glad that you came across.

    • Diana Lee profile image

      Diana L Pierce 

      16 months ago from Potter County, Pa.

      Very deep thoughts, which are equally a drama of dark emotion. Good job.

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      16 months ago from london

      A brilliant poem and one that can inspire many of us. Much Love.

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      Tamara Moore 

      16 months ago

      Poignant. Beautiful. I can feel your words. I know this story well. It is more, or less, my very own.



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      Hari Prasad S 

      16 months ago from Bangalore

      Sad poem. Great poem. Excellent.

      Scars are milestones sacred,

      Ask those who strayed wild.

      You pinned it,

      By penning it.

      - Hari

    • FlourishAnyway profile image


      16 months ago from USA

      Strong images here. Suspicion and fear throughout.

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      16 months ago

      The imagery provokes feelings of mystery, and anticipated fear. The imagery feels ominous. Sometimes staying in the present and taking one day at a time, can be both calming and building an ongoing momentum.


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