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Forevermore ~haiku~

Updated on July 6, 2013

A haiku about two hearts that beat as one.

I would like to dedicate this haiku to someone who holds my heart right now to say thank you for the love, support and encouragement he gave not just on my journey on finding the 'writer inside' label on my life but on my everyday struggle to survive.

He’s the greatest fan of my life.


One single promise

Printed on two beating hearts

Luvezt forever





© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very lovely!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy..very beautiful sentiments..thanks and Happy Valentine's Day to you both...

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Faith, KJForce.. thank you so much! Happy Vday too! God bless.

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      Jonathan McCloskey 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      Great Haiku, perfect for Valentine's Day right around the corner.

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Beautiful sentiments, hope you both have a wonderful Valentines day

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Yes, this is perfect for Valentine's Day, Mycee!

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      Aga 4 years ago

      Very nice! Lovely haiku.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Enjoy :-)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Jon, Rosemay, Deb, Monis, Mhatter: Thank you for stopping by and for the comment.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      That was a real nice and touching Valentine!

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Great haiku heart speak. ^

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Rasma and Jackie!

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      vespawoolf 4 years ago from Peru, South America

      What a beautiful tribute to the man you love!

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      Paula 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      I am fond of the haiku. This one you present to us, is stunning.....such touching words of love. You are a woman of sweet passion for your loved one...UP+++

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thank you vespawoolf!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      paula, this is really touching! thank you so much!

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      Juvy Sumalinog 4 years ago from Cagayan de Oro City, Philippines

      wow... how sweet of you...

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Juvy! :)

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      Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Hi Mycee. This is beautiful tribute to a wonderful man and the love that you share. I am glad he encouraged you to find the ‘writer inside.’ Happy Valentine’s Day to you both. :-)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Genna. Happy Valentines to you too!

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      Rob Welsh 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

      Great 'engaging' words... these have a clear 'ring' about them! :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Pearldiver!

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      Beautiful - happy valentine's day!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Happy Valentines Lesley!

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Your simple words are so powerful in regards to the day. You are very blessed to have found someone so supportive in in your life.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Spy, this is so heart-felt. I clicked on the link you provided. I don't know how I missed that remarkable poem. This is tremendously awesome my sweet friend. I am so happy that you are completely loved! You so deserve it!!

      Lots of Love,

      Sha

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Dianna. that's sweet :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow, thank you so much Sha! i wished that this will be until forever.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Beautiful and I'm really happy for you, Mycee. God bless you!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thank you so much /rajan!

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