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Forlorn

Updated on May 3, 2011

We lay plunged tonight

in the darkest pit of our destiny

forlorn but our fate intertwined




Our weak bodies grow fragile

spiritually starved and dry to the bone

lost and desperate for a sign




Our weary minds wander aimlessly

to seek refuge from this curse

stemming from our life's vine



Our leaden souls linger restlessly

in the shadows of isolation

buried in the sands of time



We lay plunged tonight

in the darkest pit of our destiny

forlorn but our fate intertwined


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    • blaise25 profile image

      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      So tainted but beautifully written.

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      La Papillon 5 years ago from Melbourne, Australia

      The eloquence, and yet powerful imagery of your prose never ceases to interest me.

      I love your writing - it's 'deep', clever, creative and unique.

      I find myself re-reading your poems many times over....

      Cheers, Louise ;)

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      h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

      thank you so much for your generous feedback. i'm just glad you liked it..

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