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Forsaken Memory

Updated on October 03, 2011

Yet, another memory was created

Encrypted with lust, visually annotated

A moment in time frozen and captured

Sedated with appetite a desire rapture

The day to follow is now in sight

Adoring the farewell that ended my night

Hoping to see what the bedtime curtain holds

A conviction of what was thought unfolds

Blinded should I have been after this night

Lost in translation nothing seems right

A figment of my imagination I should have known

Away it now goes within the wind blown


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      yusefblack 5 years ago

      Love it.... Slaves to ??? What once was, or even wasn't

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      More like what wasn't is correct!! Thanks Yu!!



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      HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Very nice!

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Hattie, thank you :)


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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      So Bella, after all is said and done, Was it good for you...Reading this Poignant Poem tells it like it is my friend.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great poem, up/beautiful

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      jfay2011 5 years ago

      thats a lovely poem, good descriptions

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      B., Lets just say im not crying over spilled milk whats done is done ;)

      Writer, Thank you :)

      Jfay, too sweet thanks!



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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      This is a poignant expression of what was or wasn't, I felt the emotion. Nice work here, bella, as always!

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      saddlerider1 5 years ago

      The heat of the moment, the lust in the night. The temptation for both under a moonlight of delight. Faded from memory, it lingers awhile, tasting was fine and the

      rapture entwined with bodies unfolding on sheets of satin silver. Now gone, like dust in the wind, blown away never to appear again, awoken and rubbing your eyes you wonder did this truly happen?

      I loved the imagery....bravo, rated Up..

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      a memory created, perhaps just a dream, when things are too good to be real. such passion such desire unfolds in one night and then its all gone... beautiful and touching poem as i can relate. a figment of my imagination..i should have known.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      tnder, Thank you it was something that was so I thought but then by their actions it was smeard into something that isn't. They try to repaint the smear but its too late the smudges are noticable.

      Saddle, I loved the recap you said it exactly how I thought it out to be. Gosh darn it why cant anything ever work in my favor. I just want what I want thats it no questions ask just do it lol. ;)

      Nikki, Dont you just hate that phrase its just too good to be true?? Geez luiz :? Yes should have known that its just one little memory thats it nothing ever will grow :( oh well only time can tell. Oh and I will be by to read your short story I started reading it but been busy at work.

      smiles :)


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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 5 years ago from India


      Greetings from MAKUSR. You bring a raw quality and excitement through your poems.

      Lots of Love,


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      Sneha Sunny 5 years ago from India

      amazing bella...... I love it!!

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Fabulous bella, and the picture perfect.

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      Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Blinded By The Night,

      Dream's So Right,

      Longingly Remain In My Sight.;)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Loved it Bella, Was it a dream?

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      leann2800 5 years ago

      Wow. Thats just how I feel when I wake up with a cold realization that it was all just a dream.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Mak, Thank you very much for your comment and thoughts :)

      Sneha, Thank you very much you are truly the best!!

      Movie, I thought so to..

      Acer, absolutely :))

      Always, It wasn't a dream I wished it was at times!!!

      Leann, I wish it was a dream but it isn't.

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      A James Di Rodi 5 years ago

      Beautiful poetry. Loved it! Bravo, rated way up. :)

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      PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan

      Beautiful. Thanks.

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