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Free Your Words

Updated on March 4, 2013

Free Your Words

By Tony DeLorger © 2011


Dear Hubbers, it has come to my attention that many of us are posting work that is often below our potential and frankly, posted for the sake of posting and maintaining a Hub score. This is human nature and is to be expected, and the only one hurt by this practice is us. Notice, I have included myself for having failed in this way and deeply regret it; for I know better.

We are writers, interested in many genres and applications, but still writers. We are creative people and there is art in what we do. Like all arts there is a process of learning and practising and we ultimately seek perfection, just like any artist, musician, sculptor, poet or anyone in a creative pursuit. Let me explain...

When I was younger I worked in the music business, in recording studios writing and producing radio and television commercials and soundtracks. As an adjunct to my musicianship I studied with a vocal coach in Sydney for many years. I did what you would expect; learned how to breathe and control both muscles and support breath, did endless scales and vocal exercises and learned how to sing and take control of my voice.

There is a term they use; it is called ‘freeing the voice’. After years of training, of boring exercises and monotonous rituals something happens quite unexpectedly. Suddenly when your brain asks your voice to do something, it does it perfectly, with no strain or hesitance, and with perfect pitch. It is as if the voice has become a separate entity, like a bird released it soars through the air with complete and masterful control. This is ‘freeing the voice’. Now whenever that person sings, the performance is about emotion and expression, the technical part of the voice being sound. The voice has become an instrument. This feeling of freedom is the most exquisite and rewarding feeling and the sound of this voice is one of pure emotion and love as a consequence.

As an artist there is a similar metamorphosis. We are trained how to draw, learn perspective, use colour, develop brush techniques and every technical aspect of art. As people we use our life experience to reflect in colour and form our perceptions of the world. It takes many years to develop all the techniques required to be a competent artist, and a lot more years to mature and find authentic expression with which people will relate. At some point and after years of dedication the artist feels that freedom enter his work, an open channel to the flow of creativity.

Writers too go through a metamorphosis. We must firstly learn the language, grammar, punctuation and all the technical requirements of written communication. Then, depending on which area of expertise we wish to follow, we need to learn the rules of that genre: poetry, creative writing, prose, fiction, articles, short stories, and plays, film scripts and so on. When we have learned all that, we again need to understand the topics of our work through both research and life experience. Beyond that we need our creativity, our ability to express ourselves in a creative and elegant way, word-smithing and using clever metaphors, similes and interesting structures to entice the reader to read, and keep reading.

Writing is an art that requires endless dedication and continuous practice. We must learn from our predecessors and to also hone our own style and purpose in writing. We are each individuals who write as no other can. Like the singer, we must free our words.

So next time you’re posting your work, make sure it is for the right reasons and you are happy with both the quality and content of your post. Hub scores are meaningless without the dedication to your writing. It doesn’t matter whether you are professional or not, this is about the integrity of your art, and that to an artist is foremost.


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    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thank you Prayzes; I'm glad you related. With any art form, one thing I have learned, that at some point we have to let our work go. It may have faults, it may be improved, but being pedantic with our results can also be destructive. We have to accept that for now, this is what I have accomplished, and then move on. Honing any craft takes time, and each work has its intrinsic qualities. Endless revision can often destroy the essence of the work and be counter-productive. Take care.

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      Prayzes 

      6 years ago

      Thank you so much, your words were revelatory for me and I experienced a sense of freedom, in realizing that this gift -- I want to offer in the best presentation I can. However, I have fallen into the trap of endless revisions and I have many unfinished and unpublished writings. However, I will continue and work toward honing my craft until I have entered the realm where my words are free. Thank you.

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      7 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      My pleasure, Theanalogkid. Thanks for reading

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      Theanalogkid 

      7 years ago

      When ever we trade excellence for numbers art suffers. Thank you for reminding me.

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      7 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Kind words LadyFae. So glad you're enjoying my work. Take care.

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      LadyFae 

      7 years ago from Under the Stars

      I'm reading and appreciating your work. And thank you for being on this Hub experience...

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      7 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks for reading and commenting LadyFae. Hope you can read some more of my work.

      And thanks Paul for dropping by. Glad you enjoyed the post.

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      7 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks again Sem, for your kind words and support.

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      Paul Richard Kuehn 

      7 years ago from Udorn City, Thailand

      Excellent article Tony! Writing is really and art and I'm just now trying to develop it.

    • LadyFae profile image

      LadyFae 

      7 years ago from Under the Stars

      As a dancer and a writer I couldn't agree with you more. Thank you for publishing this very true article.

      Love and hugs

    • Sembj profile image

      Sembj 

      7 years ago

      Great article Tony. I am guilty of all the sins you discuss. The sentiments calling us all to do better are a kind of sermon on the hub. And no one can fault you for not following what you preach. As always, the article is beautifully written and it makes for wonderful reading.

      As always, Sem

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