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Friendship´s Light/a poem

Updated on February 20, 2010

Friendship`s Light

Two lost souls were wandering

wandering,

in the night.

In the darkness, they

could not find their way.

Then,

one day,

a spark appeared,

a small ray of light

that slowly grew

till,

gradually,

they saw the light was friendship

guiding them.

They could see the path

and knew,

if they didn’t stray,

friendship would never

turn the light off,

ever again.


7 September 2005


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      myownworld 7 years ago from uk

      lovely poem humming...! see, how beautifully you can write too? There's nothing like the warm glow of friendship, yes. keep writing..always..! (rated this up btw.)

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Thank you very much myownworld. That is welcome praise coming from you.

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      Jen's Solitude 7 years ago from Delaware

      Very touching, is your friendship still going strong nearly 5 years later? I hope so. :)

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Yes, it is. Stronger than ever. Thanks.

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      It is so touching, I just loved it...

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Thank you for reading my poem.

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      sophs 7 years ago

      Beautiful poetry I love it! Great work :)

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Thank you very much sophs.

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      I hope we don't stray. Thanks

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Thank you too.

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      Lahoreee 7 years ago

      I think that this poem contain the blissful ingredients of soulful poetry. When love binds hearts with the glu of eternal joy it brings endless ecstacy that overflows in form of poetry.

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Thank you for a wonderful comment, Lahoreee.

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      Faye Constantino 7 years ago from Florida

      Light! That's what I'm talking about! Where there is light, we can do anything!

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Thank you,Faybe Bay for your comment and for reading my poem.

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      jdbrown426 7 years ago

      This is a very sweet poem and so true because the light of friendship and love will always keep one another out of the cold of darkness.

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      Hummingbird5356 7 years ago

      Thank you for your words. That is so true.

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      SamAntone 6 years ago

      "True" friendship will never die.

      In my perception, this poem can apply not only to people, but to animals of the same species, or of different species. It also reminds me of the poem I wrote about the sparrow: the two needed each other.

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      Mystique1957 6 years ago from Caracas-Venezuela

      Humming...

      Sweet and deep. Friendship is one of the most authentic feelings there is. Once is established is a bond like a blood tie. Quite beautiful the way you put it!

      A pleasure to follow you as well,

      Warmest regards and infinite blessings,

      Al

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      Hummingbird5356 6 years ago

      SamAntone. Thank you for reading my poem. What you say is true. I will also read your poems and other writings.

      Yes, Mystique1957,friendship is one of the most authentic feelings, you are right. I am glad you liked the poem. And for following my hubs.

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      I'm keeping that light on Hummingbird!

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      Hummingbird5356 6 years ago

      Thanks, Micky.

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      oliversmum 6 years ago from australia

      Hummingbird5356. Hi. You have a beautiful way with words.

      The light of Friendship should never go out.

      Loved your Poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. :) :)

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      Hummingbird5356 6 years ago

      Thank you. I am only happy that people like my work.

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