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Frozen river

Updated on February 9, 2016

My first poem


Frozen river

Sweet fallen embrace of death come forth,

Taste the human’s pitiful sorrow grace,

Rejoice in their decadent ways of late,

Show no mercy in the final hours of discontent.


There is no need for weeping, Children,

The reapers grip is quick and painless

Salvation lacks of hope and dreams,

Illusions fade; just close your mortal eyes

It’s time to leave this wretched world.


The fields of everlasting glory

For which you fought all of your life,

Are waiting clearly on the other side

The blight of day and calm blue sky,

Your turn it’s now, enjoy the ride.


You mortals grind shadows of southing future

Don’t cry for man, he is but late

To catch a train in heaven’s station,

Becoming one with loving tension,

In ancestral promise of redemption

The single thing worth fighting for,

The warm embrace of God’s reflection.




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    • johnnydhm profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from Romania

      Thank you :)

    • LaurieDawn profile image


      7 years ago

      Stunning. Very profound, and I hope there will be many more to come. Your prose is beautiful.



    • tnderhrt23 profile image


      7 years ago

      What an outstanding, powerful piece! Voting up, awesome and beautiful!

    • chisom emmanuel profile image

      oji chisom emmanuel 

      7 years ago from NIGERIA

      keep ti flowing its a nice one

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      Vincent Moore 

      7 years ago

      Yes I agree with the above two last comments. You are gifted with verse and prose combined. I enjoyed this poem very much, look forward to reading your second and upcoming writes. Nicely done.

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      Catherine D. 

      7 years ago from Canada

      A very beautiful and well written poem. It's your first but definitely won't be your last. Keep on writing and hope to read more hubs from you.

    • exquisitestill profile image


      7 years ago from Texas

      You are definitely blessed with a gift...


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