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Full Mooned

Updated on March 16, 2011
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Mighty Mom is a keen observer of life. She shares her personal experiences and opinions in helpful and often amusing ways.

Blissfully blank

My head on the pillow,

Sweet slumbering solace.

'Til jolted awake.

Something's off. Someone's here.

Ears pricked, pulse quick'ning

I bristle alertness.

Alarmed door creaks

Tinkling its warning

What the…?

Bolting upright to see

I'm blinded by brightness

My mole eyes pop open

My arms flailing Braille

Who's that creeping around my door?
Who's that creeping around my door?

At the window,

Dark wooden slats

Cut striated slivers

Of silvery moonlight

Winking and blinking, insistently brilliant,

Like some urgent Morse Code,

Beseeching me

… what?

,

Bad Moon Rising

The clock says twelve-forty

Is it midday? Or midnight?

Pulse racing, I streak

Away from the blindness

Toward the intrusion.

Who’s that in my foyer?

What was the moon’s message?

“Hey, Mom, I’m home.

Full moon, you know.

People drive crazy.”

“Yes, Honey. I do know.

It does make us crazy.

To bed with you, now.

It’s late though it’s light.

Shut your blinds, shut your eyes.

And don’t forget

to turn off the moon.”

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      Rory'S 7 years ago

      great poem you should write more poetry i enjoy reading y

      your work

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      mgamoras32 7 years ago from United States

      This is a lovely poem the pictures of the lone wolf and moon are superb. There is also a song called WaterEarthMoon that corresponds to the nature of things as well

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Aw shucks, MPM. You're making me blush. Coming from a wordster such as yourself, this is a true compliment. I thank you. So excited I think I'll go out and howl at the moon (not full tonight, tho, although only a coupla days till the Autumnal Equinox!)

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      manlypoetryman 8 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Really, a great poetry read...indeed. Surely...all full moons leave much to the imagination. Yet...you have managed to capture this one moonlit night in poetry...very well I might add...and helped us readers...get to envision the same feelings and emotions that you experienced. Very Real. Bravo...Well Done!

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      AIDY, I'm glad you got around to visiting. I am loving doing hub poems -- decorating them with images is a big part of the excitement!

      Ralwus -- LOL. I don't need to have guns in the house. All I would need to do is flash a prowler with my nakedness and they'd run for the hills:-). MM

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      ralwus 8 years ago

      BOO! Nice bit of prose here. ummm, were you really naked when you 'streaked' away from the brightness? oh my, hehe

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      MM, just getting around to this one and I enjoyed it very much, I wanted to add to your already awesome comments. I like the poet in you. I love the images that accompanied, very nice.

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Hi rebekahELLE, I am so glad you liked my poem. And yes, it's that light at night time of month again!

      I will look forward to reading your poetry. I've found people very, very supportive here. Thanks for commenting. MM

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      rebekahELLE 8 years ago from Tampa Bay

      another full moon is here~~~ WOW, love your poem, and style, exciting to read. I also write poetry but haven't posted any here as yet~~ I do have one about the moon~~~ enjoy reading your work!

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      Yangtze 8 years ago

      Yes,it is so wonderful!

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Yangtze. Thank you! Eclipses are cool, aren't they?

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      Yangtze 8 years ago

      Moved poem,a such placid night!

      I love the full moon!I am so lucky to see the total solar eclipse on July 22.

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Nutuba! Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. I'm enjoying a respite from the too bring full moon these days.

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      nutuba 8 years ago from North Carolina

      I love this! Brilliantly done!

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Puppascott -- Sorry to have freaked you out with the mole eyes! That's exactly how I felt, tho. Like a blind mole coming up out of the dark staring into the too bright moon.

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      puppascott 8 years ago from Michigan (As far as you know...)

      MM,

      I have to admit that I can't remember anything I read after "mole eyes." Just trying to picture someone with those little beads on their face was too much; I couldn't get the thought out of my head. Thanks.

      Scott

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Hey! Hows my favorite Hubber nurse (well, you and AEvans both)? Good to see you. Glad you got a chuckle.

      You know, you have been posting such an array ov great photos -- you should do a hub that is just a gallery of k@ri photos, lol!!! MM

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      Kari Poulsen 8 years ago from Ohio

      LOL, I loved it! Yes, the full moon can make us crazy! You gave me a nice chuckle. I'll remember that one..."And don't forget to turn off the moon". Very clever poem. :D

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Hi Cindy! What a beautiful image -- people all over the world communing via watching the moon! I also am intrigued with the moon's pulll on the tides. Not so much the disruptive effect it has on animals and people during these full moons. Pretty, but man, I need a good night's sleep!

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      Cindy Letchworth 8 years ago from Midwest, U.S.A.

      Love this. I also love the moon. Sometimes I just go outside and stand there gazing at its brilliance, wondering who else is gazing at it too.

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Thank you, Uriel. I love your writing, too! MM

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      Uriel 8 years ago from Lebanon

      wow the images are outstanding.... The poem added to my imagination especially while reading ALpha and omega by patricia Briggs (concerning werewolves) totally loved the images :D Gr8 one

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Why thank you, Rochelle. My Hubby is an avid Farmer's Almanac reader and always tells me the official name of each month's full moon. They are so colorful.

      The full moon in dark woods -- that's a beautiful image (why does Robert Frost come to mind?).

      This particular full moon was like being under a fluorescent interrogation light in Precinct #9:-). MM

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      Rochelle Frank 8 years ago from California Gold Country

      Lovely imagry. I love the full moon in my dark woods, every month is different, but always startlingly bright. No wonder the ancient tribes thought her a goddess.

      You are certainly mighty, as well.

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Russ, Maggs, You made my afternoon. Thank you for enjoying my writing! MM

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      maggs224 8 years ago from Sunny Spain

      You deserve all the praise they have given you wonderful hub

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      Russ Baleson 8 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

      And let me add to it. You deserve it! Gripping, scary and funny.

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Uh oh! Now I'm getting blinded by Hub Love:-)! But I love it. And I love my friends. You are the best! xoxo

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      Triplet Mom 8 years ago from West Coast

      Wonderful poem MM very moving. Keep them coming!

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      Pachuca213 8 years ago

      De nada! Love you lots chica! thats what amigas are for, que no?!

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      You are all too kind -- or else have been Moonstruck (hey -- gotta add that classic movie to my Amazon.com offerings!).

      It's great to have such a warm reception here on HP for my foray into a new narrative poetry. Here's to HP, the most supportive writer's community ever. Here's to hubber friends like

      alekhouse, BC (good to see you "back" my dear), advisor4qb, lady_e, bgpappa (good to see you enjoying non-political writing:-), wesleycox, my new friend fastfreta, RB (haven't see you around in a bit -- thanks for visiting!), alittlebitcrazy and my nature sister and fellow lunatic, pachuca! THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH. MM

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      Nancy Hinchliff 8 years ago from Essex Junction, Vermont

      Loved this, MM... Compelling and very fluid...reads really well. Hey! didn't know you were such a good poet. Congrats!! Keep it up.

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      advisor4qb 8 years ago from On New Footing

      Nice poem!

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      Elena 8 years ago from London, UK

      Lovely Poem :)

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      bgpappa 8 years ago from Sacramento, California

      great, just great

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      wesleycox 8 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      This is an excellent poem. I think my pulse actually quickened.

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      Alfreta Sailor 8 years ago from Southern California

      As usual MM, nice poem!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Those years will come soon enough. So glad mine are are still sweet peas.

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      alittlebitcrazy 8 years ago

      The moon was beautiful last night, but it sure can make us act a little crazed. Nice poem!

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      Pachuca213 8 years ago

      You are so crazy...or should I say Looney (Luna-tic) LOL.... Isn't that where the term came from? I think that is pretty cool.

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      Susan Reid 8 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Thanks SP, dohn, Pachuca and emohealer.

      Yes, it IS a full moon (or was last night). Round up the animals and pray for a breeze to cut the stillness.

      Ahhhoooooooooooowwwwwww (that's me howling). MM

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      Sioux Ramos 8 years ago from South Carolina

      Love the full moon, was looking at it earlier. I also Love your poems, Very interesting!

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      Pachuca213 8 years ago

      I loved it! You and I were in the mood for expressing nightly nature scenarios weren't we? LOL...is it a full moon? LOL

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      dohn121 8 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

      I really liked the pleasant disruption by your child to pull you out of your stream of consciousness! Great job!

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      SweetiePie 8 years ago from Southern California, USA

      I always love clear nights when I can see a full moon. Great poem, and these images truly go along with it.