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Gloomy Day: A Poem

Updated on July 6, 2017

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Gloomy day


My heart so heavy


Not beautiful day


My knee feel shaky



The weight burdening my chest


My eyes start to acting funny


Making crinkle and raising the heat


taking control over me



Do not want to think


I need to reset my mind


Erase everything


That flooding and about to put root in mine



Istighfar


It’s all I need


And rest for while


From seducing by weep



I came to this path


In so much awareness


Should not allowing myself


Being bent by silly thought and foolishness



Just don’t think!


Definitely need to reset my mind


If it is hard to breath


Unless I know what I want



Keep that in mind!


Keep that in mind...



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But sometimes…


There is something about honesty…


Which is so hard to put away…


And just let it go…


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Hhhhh…


Gloomy day indeed!

                  I know I'm look gloomy. But even so, I still look cute, right?

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, chison emmanuel. It was gloomy day for me indeed but in the end everything great! Thank you, chison. I really appreciate your comment. ^_^

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    oji chisom emmanuel 6 years ago from NIGERIA

    i guess is gloomy day for you, sure atimes i wish if i could refresh my mind and let it rest, its a good poem, and i am sure voting it

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Saddlerider1: Thank you for the pray, Sir. I wish you and all friends here well too. I would love to me Sabrina. She must be very cute. :) Thank you for reading this, Sir. :)

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    saddlerider1 6 years ago

    My feline Sabrina would love to play with those big eyed beautiful kittens to. May the sun be shining in your heart and taking away the gloomy feeling.

    Life is all about changes and the sun, moon and tides stir up the waves in our souls from time to time. We are all atoms affected by the slightest tilt of the Universe. I wish you well... very nice poem.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    And God bless you too, King Micky. :)

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    This is such a pretty piece! God bless you Freya!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello Ahorseback. That is really sweet of you. Hug back! :)

    D.william: Thank you. I am glad you like it. :)

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    d.william 6 years ago from Somewhere in the south

    I enjoyed your poem, and as everyone else noted, the kitten pictures are adorable.

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    ahorseback 6 years ago

    I like the picture , the poem, and the lovely Freya , my little muslim friend. Happy hugs tooo youuuu.Little kitten hugs by the way!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Timntim9: Hehehe. That is sweet. Thank you, Sir. You are so nice. :)

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    tlmntim9 6 years ago

    Well beautiful lady, I like this one, be happy!Tim W

    Tlmntim9

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Nell, I'm so happy to see you around. ^_^ Yeah, the kitten is cute, right. Thank you, Nell.

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    Nell Rose 7 years ago from England

    Hiya, Freya, another lovely one. And I love the kittens, they are great. thanks. nell

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    ouch! Thank you. Enjoy your spring, Micky. Have a nice day.

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    You do look cute anyway. Always. Thanks Freya for beautiful words again. It's getting warmer. The earth has tilted for us!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yeah, spring already around! But I live in tropic Island, Dohn. Sun always around. My heart is good now. ^_^ And those kitten not mine, even I really want they are!

    Thank you, Dohn. :)

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    dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    Just this week, the sun finally came out from behind the clouds after about a week. It's no wonder I'm more cheerful. I sure do hope you feel better. It can't be all that bad with all of those kittens around ;)

    Thanks, Freya.