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Garden Of Dreams (poem)

Updated on February 5, 2013

I looked to the stars of garden of dreams

Where scents dance with wonder wishes comes true

And canvas of colors passions ensue

The flowers of desire timeless it seems


The garden of dreams where seasons undo

Where mists filled with whispers pleasure there streams

And pathway to heaven promise there gleams

A veil of sheer delight beckons my view


Awake or asleep or lost in some sea

A hope of rebirth or sign of demise


What draws me what calls me to mystery

Some answers to reason magic denies


This garden of dreams which stars brought to me

Is drifting inside the veils of your eyes


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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      What a beautiful garden of dreams Martin.

      Voted up.


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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      What a lovely garden you lead us through! Awake or asleep your mystery and words are enchanting.

      Voted up and awesome.

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      Tim Mitchell 5 years ago from Escondido, CA

      I bow before thee, Sir MHatter99! Although I am more acquainted with that rascally rabbit with a watch, tis pleasure reading thou words of fair and imagery. One may say I have fallen, yet is it the wonderland you have led me.

      I ponder here and where I know not, yet mesmerized by such a picturesque setting painted with brush nearer crimson than lapis azule. Not once, more than twice, thrice was a journey of the heart led by two orbits upon a star not shinning, more so glimmering with brilliance.

      Sir Sremmus

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Beautiful garden of dreams,great poem.

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      Beth Perry 5 years ago from Tennesee

      Lovely! I know you write a lot of humorous limericks, but your sensuous ones are the ones I remember best :)

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      breakfastpop 5 years ago

      What a beautiful garden for a beautiful love. Up and beautiful!

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      Peg Cole 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Lovely symbolism and imagery. What a delightful poem. The music video was beautiful and so was the photo.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Enjoyed my walk in your garden of dreams. Passing this on.

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      Madeleine Salin 5 years ago from Finland

      This is beautiful and I love the video too. Very enjoyable!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Martin..The garden picture is lovely...Thank you...

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      Eric T. Shortridge 5 years ago from MidWest

      I love how this poem flows with so much grace and gentleness... no hard edges :)

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This was a gorgeous piece, and the illustrations were perfect.

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      You just keep getting better and better. This one was gorgeous.

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      This is beautiful, Martin. I love the last line! Dreams are what make us, in my opinion.

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      Devika Primić 5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A beautiful garden with many hopes thanks for this poem.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful, Mh Lovely imagery and video too.

      Enjoyed this very much.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh I love your garden of dreams.. oh so soothing and how I long for .. those days of warmth and love

      thank you for sharing my friend