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Get Ahead By Ceasing To Compare

Updated on October 26, 2013

Get Ahead By Ceasing To Compare

Enough with the comparing


You just make negativity go up and flaming


Making illusionary rankings


When your an individual with your own thoughts


Surrounded by barriers

But you's lie on two different spots.


You're caught up in a knot


Untangle it, so you can set smooth sails on this dot


Cause this is where it starts


Making a new path-way


Very new individual thoughts.

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© 2013 PoeticPhilosophy

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      True and thanks for sharing your opinion. :) All the best!

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      Kari Shinal 3 years ago from Fayetteville, NC

      All too often we attempt to compare ourselves to others. Constantly thinking that our own thoughts are inappropriate or wrong simply because another says so. For certain our own are no less valued that any other. Thank You Poetic!