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Get Ahead By Ceasing To Compare

Updated on October 26, 2013

Get Ahead By Ceasing To Compare

Enough with the comparing

You just make negativity go up and flaming

Making illusionary rankings

When your an individual with your own thoughts

Surrounded by barriers

But you's lie on two different spots.

You're caught up in a knot

Untangle it, so you can set smooth sails on this dot

Cause this is where it starts

Making a new path-way

Very new individual thoughts.


© 2013 PoeticPhilosophy


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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      True and thanks for sharing your opinion. :) All the best!

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      Kari Shinal 4 years ago from Seligman AZ

      All too often we attempt to compare ourselves to others. Constantly thinking that our own thoughts are inappropriate or wrong simply because another says so. For certain our own are no less valued that any other. Thank You Poetic!