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Glorious Day (poem)

Updated on February 25, 2013

I started this glorious day

I love you what else can I say

And like this let’s promise we’ll stay

There’s nothing can stand in our way

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And we found delight in this play

In bright spring of kisses we’d stray

Such visions then came to our sight

What harm could ignite in their sway

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So dazzled by life’s new array

And all that for now seemed so right

That we became blind to our plight

As something was fading away

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The last of our lavish display

When we were what made the stars bright

What dreams were formed when we held tight

Our dreams in others we’d incite

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But there upon our mountain’s height

A bed which legends now recite

Where you and I turn off the light

And back to back I said goodnight

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99...sounds like the courtship was great..then that piece of paper/commitement got in the way..and all went out like the sun at end of day....

      Very poignant message..that sometimes can't be fixed....

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      All too familiar when love in marriage gets lost when communicating love sadly somehow seems to just fade away. The song and video are powerful as to loneliness.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      What you say can't be taken back so think before you spoil the moment, such a wild imagination

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Hmmm. Love fades?

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      In the most passionate of loves, time is the enemy.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      We must always work on our relationship before it dulls. Why give it the chance to do that?

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Excellent piece of poetry, God bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful poetry. Love must strike directly or it can lose track of its target.

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      Marriage takes work, but it can be very satisfying work. Love the poem and the message.

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