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Go Back (poem)

Updated on June 15, 2013

Go back to where you started on your quest

And search the endless sands for reason why

Draw back the veils and put the truth to test

The answer for the tears across the sky

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What sadness now romances with pure Joy

An echo of a shadow has returned

And with a heart devoted does it toy

Till memories once golden are all burned

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Go back across that now vast make-believe

For seasons flavored the once long ago

Go back across the path one’s dreams may weave

For sometimes hidden mists begin to show

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And when we find the person we now live

Just look inside the mirror and forgive

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      This couldn't have come on a better night, wow. Poignant and beautiful. Thank you.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      There is an aching sadness to your words.

      If we could 'go back' would we recognize exactly what we would need to change?

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Martin, this is a very profound message. Once we see ourselves as the common factor in certain circumstances in our lives, we need to face it and forgive ourselves in order to move on.

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Very powerful and insightful poem. Look at ourselves in the mirror is sometimes the answer. Very poignant and tender in forgiving oneself.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Another masterpiece you have carved out of words !

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      frogyfish 4 years ago from Central United States of America

      Beautiful! And the video was tremendously ghostly, but very intriguing.....Its music is hauntingly lovely and goes right with your poetry. Thanks for a thoughtful message.

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      Your words are deep and meaningful. The message seems to run deep and profound. Beautiful work.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      I loved it.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Mystically wonderful.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Excellent advice, Martin.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Profound thoughts. Voted up.

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