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The Goddess

Updated on February 25, 2012
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The goddess watches and waits

Looking down below

Walking across the land

Love swells from her eyes

Soles amongst the clouds

Radiating the sun's beauty

Transcending beyond infinity

Finesse like no other

Blonde curls fall down below

She smiles and sees many stories

Some of love

Some of hate

Some of wealth

Some of poverty

Watching their lessons unfold

Bliss of purity

Un shattered beliefs

A unified prism

That exchanges and flows

A rainbow of colors

Tides flying high

And below

All radiating from pure white light

Reflecting sheen all around

She sees so much

Dwelling within her

Her breath marks the snow

And kisses the sunlight

As she dances across the sky

She longs for peace to follow

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      C21,

      i dont celebrate st patricks Day but thank you for the thought..

      TH

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Tom no this is not a poem about me! That would be so egotistical. LOL. It was just something I thought up. Thanks for the compliment though. :) Happy St. Patrick;s Day to you!

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      C21,

      Another nifty lil poemetry here for sure. So this is a poem about you eh....

      The goddess...well now are you saying... you are the goddess?? I dont disagree you are indeed a goddessnot just because you are equally sart and smokin hot....

      Im sorry- at times my penchant for the obvious gets the better of me but as with all things- merely protect myself in the unassailable sheild of truth...

      and with that I bid thee good night and adeiu

      TH

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Thank you Jim!

      @ Thanks picadilly! Glad u liked.

      @ Katrine thank you for reading and voting!

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      KatrineDalMonte 6 years ago

      Hi Caroline, a great poem! Well there surely is so much to be seen from up there. Our world is like a big stage where we all play our own part. Just as there is lots of love and happiness in this world, there are many tears and a lot of pain and sadness too. We all long for 'peace to follow'. Voted up and awesome.

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      Priscill Anne Alvik 6 years ago from Schaumburg, IL

      So beautifully worded...love the emotion potrayed!

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Beautiful work, Caroline, as always. I read this when it first arrived too, but knew I wanted to read it again. Very moving poetry.

      I like the owl too, signifying great knowledge about life and the world.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Gmaoli thank you for all your support!

      @ Sueswan thank you! I am glad you liked my words. :)

      @ Always thank you for your kind words.

      @ Savana thank you for your support!

      @ Robwrite thank you. I'm glad you liked.

      @ Reiki thank you very much!

      @ Stessily thank you so much for the kind words as always.

      @ Gypsy thank you for all your support!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome! Loved the pic.

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      stessily 6 years ago

      Caroline, A truly beautiful portrait of the Goddess.

      I especially love this view of the universe as seen by the Goddess and as the universe is meant to be:

      "A unified prism

      That exchanges and flows

      A rainbow of colors"

      And then the ending lines:

      "Her breath marks the snow

      And kisses the sunlight

      As she dances across the sky

      She longs for peace to follow"

      This poem exudes compassion, peace, and serenity. Another one of my all-time favourites from you!

      Kind regards, Stessily

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      reikieffect 6 years ago

      Awesome Caroline! I loved the contrast between the Goddess serenity and the actions she is overseeing. Up and Beautiful!

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      Rob 6 years ago from Oviedo, FL

      Hi Carolyn; Very nice. I have to wonder what a higher being looking down on us would think of this mess. I like the phrases and metaphors you use.

      Good job,

      Rob

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      savanahl 6 years ago

      What a great poem with fantastic metaphors and who doesn't love a love goddess. Voted up.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love this Caroline..A love Goddess..What a beautiful concept...

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      Sueswan 6 years ago

      Hi Caroline

      "Her breath marks the snow

      And kisses the sunlight

      As she dances across the sky

      She longs for peace to follow"

      Amazingly beautiful imagery.

      Voted up and away!

      Have a good evening. :)

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      Gianandrea Maoli 6 years ago from South Carolina

      Powerful words. A Goddess watching the world and seeing everything happening below...some good and some bad. She has a world of her own to enjoy, but is that enough for her? Very enjoyable poem!

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