ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

A Time to Remember: a short story by cam

Updated on March 6, 2016
cam8510 profile image

Chris has written more than 300 flash fiction/short stories. Working Vacation was 21st out of 6,700 in the 2016 Writer's Digest competition.


A Time to Remember

Fran walked the last hundred yards from her parked car to the ruins of an old, two story house in order to reconcile what she was seeing with what she remembered about her childhood home. The entire west wall was gone, and on that point at least, reality and memory were in agreement.

She stepped from the tangled overgrowth of the yard into the single, downstairs room which served as both a living and dining room. The wood subfloor beneath the carpet sank with each step.

Couch cushions, black with mold, lay scattered across the floor while decaying gypsum board hung from the walls and ceiling swinging in the gentle breeze.

Broken dishes littered the floor around the dining room table, the only remnants of the family’s unserved, last dinner. The northeast corner of the room was Franny’s corner. That’s what her father called it when he sent her there for being bad, which was often.


Gracie's Voice

She passed through the kitchen and the open back door into the yard where the remnants of an aluminum shed and its contents lay strewn about.

Fran walked around the yard, inspecting bits of junk that had been a part of her life as a child. Lying fully exposed to the elements in a patch of bare dirt, Fran spotted what she had hoped she would find. The broken, porcelain head, dirty lace dress and blue, glass eyes belonged to a doll, Fran’s best, childhood friend.

“Grace, look at you.” She picked up the doll along with the scattered pieces of broken skull, and cradled it in her arms. A layer of dirt coated the doll’s rosy cheeks and the lips that formed a pleasant appearance but not quite a smile.

Why are you here? said the doll.

“I got tired of pretending I didn’t have a childhood, as though I had simply materialized one day as an adult. Maybe there’s some unfinished business here that I need to take care of.”

The voice that had whispered into her consciousness over the years, calling up buried, childhood memories, had been Grace’s voice, one that Fran herself had crafted as a child so she could have someone to talk to.

You left me.

I didn’t leave you. Grandma and Grandpa came and took me away. I lived with them until I went to college. I’m sorry Gracie. I should have come back.”

You’re here now. What do you want to do?

“I want to remember what life was like in this house, to see it as an adult. Was I such a bad child? Is that why my father despised me? For all these years that’s the only answer I’ve had for why he treated me so badly.”


Remembering Her Parents

Fran carried Grace into the house. The only place she felt safe was on the floor in her corner. The remains of a wool blanket lay next to her. She crossed her legs just like when she was six years old with the doll in her lap.

I can help you remember.

“I’m counting on that, Gracie. I have to figure out how to leave all of this behind.”

You’re nothing but a worthless dog turd.

“Gracie, don’t.”

That was his favorite name for you.

“I know, but I don’t want to hear it.”

You’re a dog turd. Then in a way Fran could never have done on her own, the doll continued reciting the very words Fran had heard on her last day in the house, carrying her back in time.


“Franny, get me another beer out of the fridge and make it quick,” said her father, Gerald. The rerun on television nearly drowned out all other sounds in the house. Watching TV was what Gerald did every night after work until he either passed out in his chair or stumbled up the stairs to the bedroom. “I said get me another goddam beer.”

Franny’s mother, Maggie, was kneeling in front of her now, eyes pleading.

“Franny, you’ve got to be a good girl and do what your father says. You know he doesn’t like to be kept waiting.”

“But I don’t want him to have another beer,” whispered Franny.

“Get out of the way, woman.” Maggie was jerked backward, landing hard on her hip. Franny could hear the television announcer saying something about a weather alert, but her father was in her face, yelling loudly enough to drown out whatever else the man on the TV had to say.

“I told you twice to get me a beer, you worthless little dog turd. Now get up and do it.”

“Daddy, I’m sorry,” she said, sobbing, struggling to get to her feet.

Franny’s father grabbed her by the arm dragging her into the kitchen.

“Open it,” he shouted. She opened the refrigerator door and reached for a brown bottle, but instead knocked it off the shelf, sending it to the tile floor where it smashed into a puddle of foaming yellow liquid and pieces of jagged glass.


She tried to run, but her father caught her by the hair and pulled her into the back yard. He looked around, still grasping her red curls, and picked up a dead tree branch off the ground. Franny jerked her head forward, ripping her hair from her father’s grasp and ran around the house to the front yard. Her father rounded the corner and stopped, staring into the distance.

“Holy shit,” he muttered.

Franny turned to see what had halted her father’s vicious attack. Black clouds churned in the western sky as the wind picked up, driving the storm in their direction, changing its shape, sending part of itself downward. The swirling extension swung through the sky to the north, to the south, grew in length and finally touched the ground. Father and daughter stood like statues in a park. Fran slipped her hand into her father’s hand, and he squeezed it tight.


“Tornado, Franny. It’s a damn tornado. Get in the house, now.” They both ran in the front door. Her mother was busy in the kitchen cleaning up the broken bottle and beer.

“Forget that, Maggie, there’s a tornado comin’ right for us. Get Franny in her corner with somethin’ to cover her.”

While Maggie settled Franny in the corner with a wool blanket, Gerald was opening windows.

“I don’t think you’re supposed to open windows during a tornado,” said Maggie.

“Of course you are, now shut up and help me carry the couch over to the corner.” Maggie picked up her end and dropped it, crying out in pain, her hand rubbing her lower back. “Pick it up,” Gerald shouted.

“I can’t, I hurt my back when you threw me on the floor.”

“There’ll be more than your back hurtin’ if we don’t get behind this couch in the corner right now.”

Franny huddled under the blanket, amazed that her parents could continue fighting even as a tornado was bearing down on the house. Their voices rose with the raging wind and the roar of the twister.

Her parents were near the west wall, facing each other, arguing about what to do and what not to do during a tornado, and Franny was screaming from under the blanket.

“Stop fighting, stop fighting, stop fighting,” she yelled, peeking out from her hiding place as the house creaked its opposition to the churning wind. Her parents were oblivious to what was going on, facing one another, shaking their fists, mouths open in silent screams as the howling wind overwhelmed everything.

The entire west side of the house disappeared in an instant, and Franny watched her parents shoot out through the gaping hole and up out of sight.


Fran screamed, holding the decayed remnants of a wool blanket over her face as she huddled in her corner. Then there was silence, just as there had been a growing quietness after the tornado had passed years earlier.

“It was horrible,” Fran sobbed, tears falling from her face onto Grace’s dirty cheeks. “Why couldn’t they have stopped fighting long enough to get behind the couch with me? They’d still be alive.”

Is wishing they had lived, more helpful to you than accepting that they died?

“I suppose that’s the difference between living in the past and moving on, huh? Gracie?

Before they were swept up, what did you see?

“Fighting, screaming.”

That was your parents. What about you?

“I disobeyed my father and ran when he tried to discipline me.”

You said you came here to see things as an adult. Is that what you’re doing now?

“You’ve grown wise lying out there in the back yard, haven’t you, Gracie? But to answer your question, no, not as an adult. I’m still seeing it as little Franny.

What does Fran see?

I see a child and mother who were being tossed around like rag dolls by an angry drunk. What I needed was to curl up in my Daddy’s lap and know that I was loved.

What about your mother?

“Mother? What about her?”

What part did she play?

“Mom did everything she could to make ours a home full of love and peace. She did her best to make me behave so my father wouldn’t get angry. What more could a mother do?”

Did she make it a loving home?

“I know you think I’m missing something about Mom, but she did the best she could.”

Did she protect you and keep you safe?

“No, I don’t think she did, though I’m sure that’s what she wanted to do.

And what was Franny’s part?

“I got into a lot of trouble and made my father very angry. It was always my fault. My mother tried to get me to do better.”

Were you really a bad girl?

Fran began to cry again, reality striking her just as the tornado had struck the house. “I was just a little girl, just a six year old child who wanted her Mommy and Daddy to tell her how pretty and special she was, how proud they were of her, not that she was worthless.” The tears broke loose, as she cried out the purest words she had ever uttered. “It wasn’t my fault. That’s why I came back. I needed to live through it all again and show myself that I wasn’t a bad child, that I’m not a bad person.” She and Gracie sat together in the corner as the pain and misunderstandings of so many years began to be washed away.


Healing Begins

Fran stood at the edge of the room where it opened onto the front yard, looking back into the house of painful memories, but now from a very different perspective. “Mommy, Daddy. I have a lot of work to do and a lot of healing to experience because of how you treated me, but I’ve gotten a lot done today. I hope I can stand here one day with a different message. That will be the day I can say from my heart that I forgive you.”

She walked along the gravel driveway toward her car, the sun shining down on her red curls.

Fran, I think you’re smiling.

“I am, Gracie, and it feels good.”

I’m smiling too, Fran, on the inside.


    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment
    • Ragini Vashya profile image

      Ragini Vashya 

      5 years ago

      I missed the doll photo because it did not load in my computer. I saw the tornado and the ruined remains of the house though. I have no words to describe. I just think you are an incredibly talented writer:)

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Ann, those were very special words you shared, and I do appreciate them. As for the doll, I mostly chose it because of the photo. I saw this old house along the road in rural Pennsylvania and had to stop and take photos. I like photographing old things in their state of decay. The doll was in the back yard, as if a little girl had dropped it and never come back. It was a surreal moment to say the least. Thanks again, Ann.

    • annart profile image

      Ann Carr 

      6 years ago from SW England

      There is also the possibility I didn't hit 'post'!

      I try not to miss any of your hubs, Chris, because they are always good quality and entertaining in one way or another; you are an excellent writer, in the top echelon of hubbers.

      I especially liked the use of the doll in this one; it's a technique used often to allow children to express their feelings using an 'outside' persona, as I'm sure you know.


    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Ann, No, this isn't a rewrite, and I'd be surprised if you hadn't commented before. You are a faithful reader, and I appreciate it very much. I've heard of comments disappearing and there is always the possibility that I accidentally clicked the "deny" button. I hope that isn't the case. Thanks, though, for coming back and adding your thoughts to the comments.

    • annart profile image

      Ann Carr 

      6 years ago from SW England

      Hi Chris! I thought I'd commented on this before - is it a rewrite? Great story; I love the way it pans out and how she works through her childhood and comes to terms with the fact it wasn't her fault. Great to do this by using the doll; just like a young child would do; the doll's her friend and she trusts her.



    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Now, there's a comment that will make you set down your buffalo wing dinner and take notice. :) Thanks Akriti Mattu. I'm glad you liked the story.

    • Akriti Mattu profile image

      Akriti Mattu 

      6 years ago from Shimla, India

      I think i fell in love with your writing. Beautifully written.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      The doll photo was the prompt here, along with the house to a lesser degree. When I first saw the doll, I knew I had to write a story someday. I wanted two things, a lot of emotion and for the doll to play a significant roll without it being supernatural. If there is a weak spot, it's that the dolls roll is to a degree difficult to believe. But I am very happy with the story. Thanks for taking time to read it.

    • wingedcentaur profile image

      William Thomas 

      6 years ago from That Great Primordial Smash UP of This and That Which Gave Rise To All Beings and All Things!

      A nice, straightforward cathartic story, Cam. I voted it 'up' and 'useful,' because there is nothing more "useful" than victims of childhood verbal and physical abuse, as well as neglect, as Fran was, learning how to forgive themselves.

      Take care.

    • aviannovice profile image

      Deb Hirt 

      6 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      If it wasn't for that poor, broken doll, the woman never would have begun to heal in this dysfunctional family. I think that most families ARE dysfunctional to some degree, as life wasn't given to us with an owner's manual. Great work, Chris.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Kim, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Fran's and Gracie's story was a challenge to write, and I am pleased that you found it interesting. Thank you for taking time to read.

    • klidstone1970 profile image

      இڿڰۣ-- кιмвєяℓєу 

      6 years ago from Niagara Region, Canada

      What a great twist to telling your story. I love how Grace interacted with Fran. Nicely done. Regards, Kim

    • Michael-Milec profile image


      6 years ago

      Hello Chris, Thank you so much for your gracious concern. My mind is telling me I can't do that to you nor any other author of well intended concept to "help me" by taking your time from your busy schedule.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Michael, Thank you for stopping and reading today. It is always good to see you. You know I've always wanted to see you write something here on HubPages, but I know you feel limited with writing English. Just know that I would be happy to take what you can write and be a ghostwriter for you so you could publish it here. I just know you have to have some wonderful stories to share with us. Be well, Michael.

    • Michael-Milec profile image


      6 years ago

      Hi Chris.

      Exceptionally beautiful story carrying educational message for whole family including a loving relationship with a favorite toy.

      Voted up and awesome.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Ruby, thanks for your thoughts about the story. We left Fran well on her way to healing some deep hurts.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Bill, I appreciate those words very much. It is my goal to entertain as thoroughly as I can with the stories I write.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Shauna, I'm glad you were able to connect with the message of this story. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Chris, this was a story well told. The doll talking made the story take on a life of it's own. I love to go to old abandoned houses, and finding a doll was so intriguing. Loved it and the photos

    • billybuc profile image

      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You never disappoint, Chris. I can always count on you for a well-crafted story.

    • bravewarrior profile image

      Shauna L Bowling 

      6 years ago from Central Florida

      This is a wonderful story, Chris. Sad, but beautifully told. Sometimes we have to visit the past in order to heal and move on. I had a very clear image of Fran cowering in the corner while her parents were swept into the funnel. I guess what goes around comes around, huh?

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Frank, The doll photos do have quite an effect. Thanks for reading.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Becky, I appreciate you taking time to read this story. Yes, old, falling down houses are a problem.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Eric, thanks for reading, Eric.

    • cam8510 profile imageAUTHOR

      Chris Mills 

      6 years ago from Traverse City, MI

      Sara, Thanks for reading the story. I enjoyed using the photos, especially of the doll.

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 

      6 years ago from Shelton

      Cam, I enjoyed this short piece it had this theatrical touch to it..the doll photos kinda skinned my fears voted awesome and creative

    • Becky Katz profile image

      Becky Katz 

      6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      Beautifully written story. Unfortunately, I know many houses like this one. I hope some of them get their eyes opened.

    • Ericdierker profile image

      Eric Dierker 

      6 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Just when I needed a good read you have provided one. Thank you. I am glad the tornado took them.

    • Sara Sarwar Riaz profile image

      Sara Sarwar Riaz 

      6 years ago from Michigan, USA

      A great story, wonderfully narrated. Loved all the pictures that precisely complement the theme.


    This website uses cookies

    As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

    For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at:

    Show Details
    HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
    LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
    Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
    AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
    Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
    CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
    Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the or domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
    Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
    Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
    Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
    Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
    Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
    Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
    Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
    ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)
    ClickscoThis is a data management platform studying reader behavior (Privacy Policy)