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Great Sorrow

Updated on August 8, 2013

Some are fierce as others are small

It torn the palm tree down for spite

And tried to vex the blue with all its might

The white-crested waves crash to shore

Gray sky spark with lightning

---sung with a clash, bangs, and roar

Gulls circle the sky like white flakes sailing

It screech a high pitch cry----so mournful

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      KryssiNykki 3 years ago

      i loved your use of imagery - i could see it as much as i felt it. good work :)

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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Deep, very deep, thank you.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Can feel the sadness.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Very profound. thank you