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Updated on February 28, 2012

Great kids! even Greater adults!

When you where


You started getting

mad at your mother,

She was the one that

was closest to you

I came over.

Can’t remember

which form I took

uncle , aunt, grandad

grand mom, friend,

neighbor teacher,

in law! stepfather.

But all I asked you;

Was what could

your own Mother

have done to you?

I heard you make

That adult sound,

Then you angrily

just walked away.

I got to find out

early the next day.

That you were also

angry at your father.

Too. I said what!

What in God’s name

did your father do?

You stared me down;

I know you wanted

to say, mind your

own business son.

But you didn’t dare,

because you were

still mad at your

Parents, and you

had no one else

like your parents

who would care.

Now you so rude

You cannot ask them,

you had to wonder

if they invited me


You forgot, that you

got bigger than then

Your own parents.

In their own home.

have you ever seen

an A student find

the time to go about

arguing disrespectfully

with their parents?

The answer is no!

They have already

wisely understood

that it is those same

Parental arms, which

had held then when

they needed comfort.

So how can they now

Become so ungrateful?

Only the unwise will

start from these early,

to ignorantely damn

the same Bridge while

they are crossing.

Only a child that’s not

thinking, would forget

to remember that

it is their Parents who,

are and will be for

quite a long time

the only best friend

a child will ever have.

They are the ones

that will be listening

to your disaffections

you are going to have

with all you’re other

best friends you create!

Yes your parents are

first your parents!

Second the only true

friend a child can have

for the duratiuon of

both of your lives..

Your best friend

not theirs.

Great kids would

always and even

without any noise

or immature backchat,

be prepared to always

follow their Parents.

To learn what they know

As much as they can.

Go on to live giving

Thanks to them while

knowing that the time

would very soon be

approaching and one

can only reap that

which they have sown.

The grade A student

Child would already

know that they are favorites,

They won’t need to be

searching for attention

using Rude means.

All great kids get that

quite easily, it’s every

parent biggest dream.

Before I forget to


What could a child

who’s living at home

be getting angry

at their parents for ?

The parents must be

the ones to get angry

at the children.

First for even dreaming

of trying to poison

the only area they live.

How could they try

to cut the hand that

feeds them.

For not learning how

to grow up

How to be responsible

Children, great adults.

That's what happens

with kids that are

growing up miserable

and disrespectful

That's what they will

grow up to become

Nothing but failures.

They start out being

Ignorant and Rude.

Don’t as yet know

What, but there is

Something to prove.

You are only just

another child until

you become that special

child, who has their

parents approval first,


Great Kids! even greater adults!.


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you Rose . It's quite easy to say that we believe in the same values . Children as I was and I know you read my story . What I do is relate my childhood and the way that I feel now as a man, and give continuous thank to God and my parents.

      I it great to raise your kids your own way , but to be sincere enough to know that you cannot change anything that is already molded into them when they are grown . It should be clear and you will know , but the best of us should shine through or kids.

      Thanks for always adding something quite valuable to my hubs in your comments Rose , that's special.

      I have been saying since my school days that I would always prefer that one sincere person , than all the dishonest billionaires. For what will it profit a man if he should gain the whole world?

      Have a blessed day dear lady!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up! I love the type of little children who already talk smart and are good and helpful around the age of five. With any child as he or she grows up it's great to see them become worthy and wonderful adults.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you Eddy . As always a great pleasure to have you pop by and leave , your comment , which I do consider and appreciate greatly.

      Have a blessed day.

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      A great hub and thank you for sharing.

      Take care and enjoy your day.