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GreenDream Haiku

Updated on July 30, 2012
green  bubbles of dream in the pond of mind:-)
green bubbles of dream in the pond of mind:-) | Source

Green Dream - Haiku

A three part Haiku about some Green dream:-)


Dewdrops playing with sunrise grass

Grass smiling happy with dreams so green

Cruel wind shattered green sheen.

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Green dreams shining in pond

Dreamy pond pregnant with memory so fond

Morning pond cracks promises cottoned.

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Green chiffon tickled cool wind

Wind bubbling love in chiffon pond rippled

Dreams crying dark cloud grind.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you Gypsy for votes and your visit as well as comment here

      ( which actually i always look forward for) ...take care friend.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Real nice green Haikus.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ shining...for liking my work....its only a learning process for me.

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      Thank you@lifehealpraise.....for your kind words.

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      Thank you@ friend Patty, for your continual support. Its much appreciated.

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      Patty Kenyon 5 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Beautiful Job!!!

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      lifehealpraise 5 years ago from South Florida

      I love dewdrops they are beautiful and so is your haiku=)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Beautiful haiku's. A technique I can not master. You however have done a fantastic job.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      thank you @friend spy....for your continued support and inspiration....your comments very precious for me.

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      thank you@ snowdrops....i am flattered....but i am just trying to learn here.....your visit is much appreciated.

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      you really are amazing poet deergha!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      nature is calling! dewdrops and grass are lovely. cool and very naturific!

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      harry 5 years ago

      very cool the beautiful nature.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@ shalini dear friend, for you loved the haiku...i am just learning this type of poetry.

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      shalini sharan 5 years ago from Delhi

      dghbrh

      this is an amazing haiku, i loved it

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank You@ Josh.....friend for your continual support and inspirations.....it is much appreciated.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      dghbrh,

      Beautiful set of haikus here!