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Gypsy Dance.

Updated on September 4, 2011

Gypsy
eyes
catching
the reflection
of
the swirling
skirt that
hid
the legs
I'd come to
know
so well,
a fleeting moment
gathered
with both
hands and
stored
for a
rainy day.
I smiled
at her
youthful
twirls
and watched
as she
danced
the night away
defying the stars
to
outshine
her.

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    • snakeslane profile image

      Verlie Burroughs 

      7 years ago from Canada

      This is gorgeous, beautiful gypsy dance.

    • WriteitToday profile imageAUTHOR

      WriteitToday 

      7 years ago from Somewhere in France.

      Hello and Thank You for your comments:)

      Dave.

    • tnderhrt23 profile image

      tnderhrt23 

      7 years ago

      A vivid, sensual read..."defying the stars to outshine

      her."...just lovely!

    • WriteitToday profile imageAUTHOR

      WriteitToday 

      7 years ago from Somewhere in France.

      Once again Thanks saddlerider for your support :)

    • saddlerider1 profile image

      saddlerider1 

      7 years ago

      I felt her every move, I was the watcher and our eyes caught, then there was enchantment, she was my gypsy and we moved to the rhythm together. I loved your descriptive verse my friend. Well done, pure and artistic.

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      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      Beautiful poem...being a gypsy is hard. The rhythm in this poem is a great tribute to the beat of the drums and the bells in the dance. Your appreciation shows in the art of the music you created with your words. Great hub.

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      Adam Bradford 

      7 years ago from Howell,MI

      another great poem and example of your powerful cultivation, thanks.

    • WriteitToday profile imageAUTHOR

      WriteitToday 

      7 years ago from Somewhere in France.

      Thank you once again :) Despite what some say "reading your poems is like falling downstairs" I know the music is there for those who have the patience and the insight like you to find it :)

    • Vinaya Ghimire profile image

      Vinaya Ghimire 

      7 years ago from Nepal

      I'm reading you second time and I'm overwhelmed by your poetic pattern. You can wonderfully create stupendous images from few words.

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