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Have You Ever Think About Me? : A Poem

Updated on August 11, 2013

Have you ever think about me?

When we are apart

I’m dance alone with this solemn heart

Holding the pain of longing

Pulling this insignificant feeling

Trying to hold what I miss the most

All memories of your beautiful being

But you….

Have you ever think about me?




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    Freya Cesare 2 weeks ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Haha. ^^

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    Rik Bertrand 3 years ago from Portland, Oregon

    I Do

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Dear my sister and friend, again you are too sweet! :)

    Yes, I wrote this with lots of emotion. I don't had many words at that time since the longing feeling taken over all my words so it become short poem.

    Too much longing feeling sometimes make people speechless. Hhhh...

    Thank you for your kind and sweetness, my dear sister. :x

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    Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

    Freya i salute you ~ lovely poem with lots of emotions that one reader can seep through and lose his way. I totally love its honesty and purity. Love mixed with pure need all expressed in little mundane words that captivate the heart and make you connect to the beating heart of its owner and writer. AMAZING !!!!!!

    Always there for you

    URIEL your sister & friend :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Just like I think about you, Micky! I am your big fan. Didn't you know? LOL. Thank you for reading this. :)

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    I certainly think of Freya often!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge it is such beautiful words, dear. Thank you very much. \^o^/

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    Sa`ge 7 years ago from Barefoot Island

    they always say the simple things contain the most beauty and you just proved it again. I loved this one, such beauty in it's simplicity. ~aloha~

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Nell. Yes, he said he love it. ^_^ Thanks, Nell.

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    Nell Rose 7 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, this is a lovely poem, and I am sure he will love it. cheers nell

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi Ashleyvanillilife! Thank you for reading this. I am glad you like it ^_^.

    Gulnazahmad: salam, Sis. If I can get the way to Polar Bear heart easily by writing poems for him; I will increase the doses and will make sure he is drunk because drowning inside it for sure! LOL. And he will love me forever and I will die in happy thought. Ah, so good to imagine it will end that way. ^_^ Thank you, dear.

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    gulnazahmad 7 years ago

    You have written such a beautiful piece of poetry for your polar bear I think he cannot resist being in love with you:) hahaha

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    Elle Lewis 7 years ago from South East Asia Maritime Section - Phils

    Oh this is such a beautiful poem.. I just loved it simply beautifully!! Lucky Polar bear :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Chris :). And I am a lucky woman too!

    Thank you, Chris. ^_^

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    carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Yep, Polar Bear is a lucky man. :-)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, Pras, here in Hub Pages we have so many brilliant poets, including Mr. Story Teller; my Polar Bear. If comparing to them I am way bellow their level! But I need to let this feeling out of my heart and poem is the only way I have, since it is have therapeutic effect for me, so I have nto write it down and show it to the world. :)

    Thank you, Pras, for reading this.

    PS: Even my Polar Bear doesn't have too much hair, but he is as cute as the real one! LOL

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    prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

    I don't ever thought that you miss Polar Bear...hahaha. Sorry, just kidding. But I have to admit to you, this was soooooo beautiful. I can't make like this thing, really. You are a master of poem, Freya. Thumbs Up for you.

    Prasetio

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Pintails, well, it is not true. First you know who Polar Bear is and second, I know someone who always writing poetries about you! :P

    So long not see you around, dear. You should visit me more often. :(

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Mentalist Acer, I am lucky too, because I have him as the one I love ^_^. Thank you Mentalist Acer. :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Rawlus, among 5 million people in 5 big islands and so many small island, oh yes, I'm sure it will be easy to find him! LOL. And I am too, hoping will able to see my Polar Bear soon! :(

    Thank you, Sir. :)

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    pintails7886 7 years ago from Memphis TN

    i am with mentalist. who ever this polar bear is, Im jealous. I dont have people writing beautiful poetry for me :(:::

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    Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    Polar Bear is very Lucky:)!!

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    ralwus 7 years ago

    Well I hope you see the Polar Bear soon then. My good friend and neighbor is over there this week, Maybe you will see him, he is very tall, short hair, eyeglasses and handsome and prone to mosquito attacks. They love him. LOL