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His Question : A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017

What will you do if I tell you, "I love you?"

Will you accept my love?

Will you come to me?

And will you love me back?


What will you do if I tell you, "I miss you?"

Will you miss me back?

Will you care about me?

And will you look for me?


What will you do if I tell you, "I want you?"

Will you listen to me?

Will you stay for me?

And will you give up everything only for me?


What will you do if I tell you, "I don't care about you?"

Will you cry now?

Will you fear me?

And will you comeback to where you should be?


Human, remember me!

Who I am to you, don't you remember?

Before you born you told me, “I’m witnessing that there is no God but Allah, And Muhammad is Messenger of Allah”

But now why you turn your back on me?


Come and listen to me

While right now, you still have time to make your entrance to my Jannah

Later, when your time is pass by

Don’t cry when you lost your chance


Because if you forget about me

I will forget about you

But if you remember me

I will always remember you


So Human, what will you do if I tell you, “I love you?”

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    dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    One of the things I've learned in life is that love doesn't understand fairness--there is never any equality (in my opinion). In a relationship, one partner always loves the other partner just a little bit more. I really like the tension between the love of another and a love of the Faith. Good poem, Freya.

    Dohn

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    Little Wolf 7 years ago from Dusty Trails, Arkansas

    faith...without it, we don't get too far! where there is no faith, there can be no love...

    good poem!! well done!!

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    pintails7886 7 years ago from Memphis TN

    great poem Freya, I am very impressed as always.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Dohn, Hello. Yes, I am agree with you. There's no Equality in love, whether love between man and woman, or love to God. God always love us more than we love Him because even if there's people who doesn't believe He is existed, this person still have a good life as bless from God. It is a proof that God love human more than human love God. Thank you, Dohn. It's been a little while I am away from your Hubs. I will visit soon, Insha Allah. ^_^

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Kathy. There still love existed without faith, dear, because love is human natural need. If you check around Hub Pages religion and belief forum you will meet many atheist there. In many case somehow they are cruel among believer of faith, but if you check their Hubs you will see love too. But love without faith must be really fuzzy; with restless mind and far from calm and serene; like being lost. Because that what faith do, give us direction to go and guide to encounter the never ending drama in this live.

    Thank you, Kathy.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Pintails, there is a funny story about how this poem being made.

    When I am browsing at FB, suddenly the first line on this poem came to my mind and I put it at my status. (That happened a lot to me; found new poem while look for something to write as status) But before I managed to made the whole poem, my friends already put comments, and those comments are hilarious.

    "Eh, we both a girl, what should we do?"

    "Sorry honey, my heart not belong to you!"

    "Let's go to the Moon to harvest honey. Eh, we have Bee farm on the moon?"

    "I will puke!"

    "I will said I love you too, and now only both of us in this world! Lol." (This comment came from girl)

    I laughed so hard because of it. By the way, I miss you at my FB page, dear. ^_^

    Thank you, Pintails, like always.

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    carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    FB is a strange place, and those are some strange reactions... I like the poem!!!

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    shegarlynn 7 years ago from United States

    Nice poem, Yes you are right God love us more than we do. Some of us love human nature or material things but, those material things cannot love us back...

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Carolina, thinking back, yes I am agree, FB is strange place. I got so many strange problems with my FB pals, even somehow it can be really funny too. Thank you, Carolina. ^_^

    Shegarlynn, hi! yes, this material things can be our probation too, when we love it more than we love Allah, we will be in big trouble later, when that material things betray us. Thank you for stopping by, Sis. ^_^

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    prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

    This was really beautiful poems, my sister! I listen carefully .Thumbs Up and I rate this hub.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, thank you, Pras. ^_^ I'm glad you like it and thanks for the rate. :)

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Let's not turn our backs but remember! Thanks Freya!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you for you too, Micky. ^_^

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