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HUH?

Updated on April 4, 2011

This is just a quirky little play on words, a fun write true to my "cluelessness"...

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HUH?

I'm in an elemental, continental
mind consuming daze,
in a detrimental, occidental
death-defying haze.
In an instrumental, ornamental
mystifying maze...
I hope its transcendentally
an incidental phase!
Is it coincidental, this experimental
glaze or is it just an accidental
hysterical malaise?
Please don't expect this writer
to explain or to rephrase...
in this elemental, continental
mind confusing daze!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      It certainly is true No_Clue, your antecedental for sure, as I'm committed to follow you, a life-long friend you see, yet not quite demure, yet I'm also the argumental one, always you see, for I know of you true my friend, you'll never harm wee flea, but as both of us as non-emolumental, we both have time you see. But the best thing of all my friend is we're presentimental as key, for like I always say, my friend, there's something wonderful's to be....

      Love your pictures, and of course your writing, but I gotta tell you, that last picture is for me...

      Luv yer werk!!

      Will

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      Sunnie Day 6 years ago

      It is not conincedental that this is monumental that i write this fundamental comment..lol...Very cute! Bet I can not say that three times..haha..thanks for sharing No Clue. Always makes me smile.

      Sunnie

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      tumblintumblweed 6 years ago

      This isn't transcendental, that this poem is essential,the picture quite sentimental ,and I think I'm...overtired!!

      Very fun write..No_Clue....

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      bb, I always love your insightful poetic comments! Once in a while I wander into a little word pit and just like to wallow around and play...this was one of those times!

      Sunnie Day, your visits always bring sunshine into my day! Thank you for your lovely visit and delightful comment!

      Thank you, weed for your exhausted visit and great comment! I do appreciate you!

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      that was interesting. i like it. kinda like a sing song tongue twister. like supercagifragalisticespealladocious...spelling may differ... lol

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Nikkij, it was a brain twister! lol...thanks!

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      Bumpsysmum 6 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      Ah ha ha ha ha.......you got me!This is my normal state of mind LOL :-)

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      No_clue, I love the word play here. I found this very very interesting made me think hard lol you got my hampsters turning thanks for sharing :)

      smiles :)

      bella

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      mum, mine too!!! lol Thanks!

      bella, the hamsters were burning up the wheel as I wrote this!!! lol Thanks! Sometimes it is fun to just play with rhyming words and try and make something sensible out of them, not that this is all that sensible but it made perfect sense to me!!! Now that's a little scary! LOL

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Well, this poem contains elemental cuteness and so what if it put me in a daze...lol

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Elemental cuteness! I love it! Fossillady you are awesome! Thanks!

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      Gustave Kilthau 6 years ago from USA

      Howdy No_Clue - That was fun.

      Gus :-)))

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Many thanks Gus! Nice to see you!

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      Christina M. Castro 6 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      I'm on edge for part two of this poem- hope you write it soon!

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Thank you, CMCastro!

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      attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

      Words are meant to be in neat orderly lines and are supposed to make sense, but who's counting? I'd much rather play around with them, and this was very nicely frazed.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Thank you, attemptedhumour. I get a little "unruly" with words some days...just for fun.

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      nicomp really 6 years ago from Ohio, USA

      Be careful that you don't catch on fire...

      you may begin to blaze!

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      nicomp, indeed!!! Thank you!

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      Xavier Nathan 6 years ago from Isle of Man

      A fun poem that that made me smile. Thank you.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      To bring a smile is no small thing in this world, and Spirit Whisperer, that gives me joy! Hugs!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      very clever!

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      No_Clue 5 years ago

      Thank you PDX! I appreciate your read and comment!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      wow. Just revisited this. This is super amazing

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      No_Clue 5 years ago

      PDX, your comment made me smile this morning, thank you!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      you are quite welcome!

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      LoL, Marsha, that was so creative! I read it a few times in a row, I feel like swimming in the sea of clouds =) LOL cool stuff!

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      No_Clue 5 years ago

      LOL, Max, it is scary that this is where my head goes periodically!

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