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Haiku: Fall In Love

Updated on March 19, 2013
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The color of Fall
Leaves, Orange hue, sky's all blue
Reminds me of you!

The blues of your eyes
Make hearts flatter with a sigh!
Seasons just pass by....

Chilly winds from North
Birds flying south for warm view
Take me there with you!

Leaves falling like rain
Beautiful feelings in vain
Vanity insane!

Foliage all new
Remembering me and you
Silver drops of dew.

Lakes all silver blue
Walking together in twos
Shadows holding hands.

Whispering of wind
Sweet Thing that only you knew
Chrystal icy hue.

Feelings that are strange,
Times we had, will not exchange
Things with us has changed.

You can wait and be
The drill that you cannot see
Your heart is with me.

But you have no clue
nothing there from me to you,
Fall is for us two!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      wow lathing u really do have talent i am impressed ;0

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      LaThing,

      Stunningly beautiful with many levels of meaning one may or may not interpret as to those times in our lives when the seasons are changing. I really love the line, "Birds flying south for that warm view take me there with you!" Brings to one's mind very lovely thoughts dear one.

      Voted Way up.

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Audrey Hunt 4 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Wow! This is so lovely and I felt the words going right through me. And the photos bring so much additional emotion to the perfect flow of your lines. Voting up and more and will share!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So beautiful my friend;thank you for sharing and enjoy your weekend.

      Beautiful/up here.

      Eddy.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey my buddy, Frank, THANKS!! Can never be equal to you though ;)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear Faith, love the way you interpret the poems. You are an insightful person :)

      Thanks for reading my Haiku, and for your votes!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Vocalcoach! It's so good to see you in my corner..... And I an so glad that you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Eddy! Appreciate all your help...... you are a wonderful friend :)

      Glad you liked it!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      What a journey back and forth between love and Fall, and then bring it all together at the end. Loved it! I see you're hiding again in your profile picture. Must have had too many fans stop you in the streets! : ) Great Job!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Richy! Good to see you.... I told you I was Kermit the Crab, or hermit the frog.... Or whatever that is! I have to go back in my shell :))

      Thanks for reading my Fall Haiku.... Just playing around with words you know.... Fall, as in the season, and fall, as in love! Hehe

      Always good to see you :)

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      So beautiful, I just want to keep reading over and over....

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      Jonathan McCloskey 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      This compilation of haikus has really put me in the mood for Fall, so I'm ready to rake the leaves and put on my jacket! Well done.

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      LittleFairy 4 years ago

      Very beautifully written! So full of color and imagery :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Oh, Lesley, that's one of the best comment I have ever gotten! Thanks!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Jon! LOL, glad I could inspire you to go and rake your leaves..... At least there is something good coming out of it :))

      Really appreciate your visit, and thank you for the nice comment!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thank you, littleFairy! Really like your name there, :)

      Glad you enjoyed it

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      oceansider 4 years ago

      Hi LaThing,

      Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry with us....I enjoyed reading it very much!.....Well done!

      Take care, Helen

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Your poem is so beautifully written, it made it a very awesome read !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Laurinzo Scott 4 years ago

      Beautiful tribute to a wonderful style of poetry LaThing, Bravo!!!

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      This is a totally amazing read and you are such a great writer.

      Voted up awesome and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Come to think of it, I've picked the perfect song for you...

      You shine brightest when you write of love...Voted UP &ABI.

      Hugs, Maria

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Lovely thoughts and words, thank you for sharing these!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Fall is upon us and the colors are beautiful. Loved your poetry..Cheers..

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey Helen, thanks for stopping by..... You are always welcome here! Appreciate your comment.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      @Kashmir, you are an awesome friend! Thanks for your comment..... Glad you enjoyed it :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Laurinzo! Great to see you..... Thanks for the encouragement :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Joyce, thank you for reading my little haiku :) glad you liked it. Appreciate all your votes. Have a nice weekend......

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Yes, you did, Maria!! I have listened to it few times now, and it's so lovely, tearful, and touching! Thanks for the interview, Mar :)

      Appreciate all your support, girl friend! Hugs from here.....

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Mark! Thanks for stopping by..... It's always good to see you :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hello, Ruby"...... Glad to see you here. Fall is my favorite time of the year. Thanks for commenting, it's always lovely to see you. :)

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful Haiku and welcoming the season! Love the new profile pic!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey Btrbell!! Thanks for stopping by..... And appreciate your comment. Oh yeah, the mask.... It's the old one, I just back to it :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      very impressive Lathing! so beautifully written :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Your words just flowing with the dancing of the autumn leaves. Passing this on.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey there, M, glad you came by! Thanks for the comment..... :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Gypsy Rose, thanks for the beautiful comment, and for sharing it! Appreciate it, dear friend!

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Perfect poetry LaThing, this is beautiful. Voting up and rating it that as well as awesome and interesting :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey James, thanks for stopping by, and really appreciate you comment and votes :)

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      This is so beautiful. Your sentiments expressed are lovely. And I love how you did the photos. That is so unusual and I have never seen it done like that before. Very creative. Voted up and shared!

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      bluebird 4 years ago

      Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing your talent and beautiful imagery of fall and leaves and love with us here.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Suzette, good to see you here! Thanks for the wonderful comment. Appreciate your sharing it.......

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, little Bluebird, LOL..... thanks for the beautiful comment! Really appreciate your dropping in :)

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      Joseph De Cross 4 years ago

      Well done! The give and take of life. The reason to be on earth and sharing thoughts with so much delight. Wonderful inspiration Lathing!

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      Ode to Fall, and Love and all those Wonderful things...Loved your Photos too. One Amazing read. Voted UP & Beautiful to YOU!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Joseph, for the comment and for stopping by! Appreciate your support..... See you around!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, B. Malin! Thanks for the wonderful comment, and really appreciate all your votes. Glad to see you again :)

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      Joseph De Cross 4 years ago

      Yes I heard you my friend (automated response...beep..beep.. over)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Ha, ha ..... Good one, Joseph! Got to go, again....... Beep, beep.... Over... And out. :))

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      Bobby Isenhower 4 years ago from Crothersville, IN

      Great read :) Voted up and awesome :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Robert, glad to see you here..... Thanks for the comment and the votes! See you soon :)

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi LaThing

      "Lakes all silver blue

      Walking together in twos

      Shadows holding hands."

      Love the imagery. Beautiful!

      Voted up and away

      Take care

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey, Sue, thanks for all the votes and always glad to see you :)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ....there is much poetic splendor to be had and enjoyed in these heartfelt and oh so pure words of yours - this is a real treat actually but now I need a 'love' for the winter - a winter kind of love - a winter woman - lol - and sending warm wishes as always and good thoughts to you from lake erie time ontario canada 10:35am

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear Epi, thanks for such kind comment. You are a wonderful friend, who is always appreciated ..... I am sure you will find a 'Love' for the winter, and I wish you well in your quest :)

      Stay warm and happy!

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      [ Danson Wachira ] 4 years ago from Nairobi, Kenya

      Hi LaThing,

      Love is the biggest gift that one can ever have and a huge loss if it is not appreciated. I like this awesome poem, obviously you are gifted poet. Voted up and shared.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Amazingly beautiful LaThing......Votes all up and sharing also :-)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      True, dwachira! Sometime it is not noticed and thus is lost! Always appreciate your visit. Thanks for the wonderful comment..... See you around!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Dghbrh! It's always a pleasure to see you.... Have a wonderful day :)

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Beautiful La, loved it! :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Aubrey! Great to see you here, and thanks for stopping by. :)

      Take care......

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