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Haiku Poem that sums up my evening

Updated on April 10, 2012

Step away it’s mine

No one need get hurt today

Last slice of peach pie…


Wow, Haiku poems are very short! It seems like all the time I sweated over this hub in no way offsets the calories I consumed by eating the slice of pie. So I ask myself, "Was it worth it?" Was it worth eating the pie and was it worth writing the Haiku. The answer comes back with a resounding "YES!" on both counts.


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      Pete 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      @brakel2 - The inspiration was my wife's excellent peach pie which I had no intention of sharing, nor will I ever...with anybody...never! Lol!

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      Audrey Selig 5 years ago from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma

      I like your photo and haiku poem. One thing I do like about poem hubs is to know how the poet got the inspiration to write. I don't know how that would work in a haiku poem. Anyway, love it and wish I had done more with poetry. You have talent.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hahaha cute and cute!

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      Pete 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      @Angelme566 - I'll split it with you...

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      Angelme566 6 years ago

      That's my favorite haiku and a pie..share some pie and win a!

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      Pete 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      @ImKarn23 - thank you for the exhuberent comment, but whilst I cling to my last waking breath my last piece of pie will remain firmly in my grasp...

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      Karen Silverman 6 years ago

      YES! now..pass the pie!

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      Pete 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      @lovedoctor926 - this hungry made me haiku.

      @tnderhrt23 - remember to wipe your keyboard :-)

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Now this left me drooling! Nice job!

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      lovedoctor926 6 years ago

      Love it! this haiku made me hungry. so very worth it.

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      Pete 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      @ Deborah Brooks - delicious and nutritious and all mine!

      @ Faith Reaper - the scenario you outlined is tantamount to a declaration of war. Glad you enjoyed your "bite" or Haiku

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      Faith Reaper 6 years ago

      Yummy! Clever, clever, clever - enjoyed every bite (I mean bit) of it! Voted up. Don't you just hate it when you're brought a piece of pie at a restaurant and it is really more of a sliver than a piece, and the person with whom you are with says, "I don't want any," and then that person eats most of your piece of pie!!! I mean, come on . . . Faith Reaper

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      the pie looks delicious to me.. and the Haiku does too. I love how you did it.

      voted up


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      Pete 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Thanks Susan... indeed it was.

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      Susan Zutautas 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Delicious haiku :)


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