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Haiku - Seduction

Updated on May 7, 2012
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Haiku- Seduction

by

Dr. Darryl Winer


Shy tentative smiles

Eyes peering through sleek blond hair

An invitation


Gentle back and forth

Keen, clever innuendo

Teasing and mocking


Electric senses

Fingertips on yielding skin

Tiny shocks within


Bodies in embrace

Music beckons the partners

Sway to the rhythm


Impatient mouths match

Fueling and fanning the flames

Unquenchable thirst


Greedily taking

Voracious and ravenous

Greedily giving


Ensnared and eager

Now shameless and impulsive

Hoarsely whispered pleas


Now, for the first time

Fear and wanton desire

Dissolve in raw lust


No distance between

Shared time, space, and breath

Still too far apart


A final merging

Unknown ere and startling

Overcome by heat


To give and receive

Exquisite ballet begins

Sharing a single heart


Riding the wave’s crest

Sweet reciprocal motion

Instinctive, innate


Shallow quick inhale

Foretells impending zenith

A painter’s palette


Flesh still intertwined

Hearts slowing to composure

A brief reverie


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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      Beautifully written.

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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Thank you Phoebe-

      I had delayed publishing this set of haiku because they are a bit steamy. But I noticed that other hubbers were not so constrained. So, here they are.

      Thanks again

      -DW

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      Maree Michael Martin 5 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

      Your pictures are perfect. Cuts down on the steaminess, LOL! These are very good. Thank you for publishing these great haiku's.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Electrifying, zapping, erotic haiku! Wow, DW, you just surprised me so much, What a force! That was not only calling for tingling of some parts but yeah... Awesome striking new side! =)

      p.s. How ironic that now I'm going to my Prison break read...

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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Hi Ruby-

      I'm glad you enjoyed them. Please stop by anytime.

      -DW

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      Joana e Bruno 5 years ago from Algarve, Portugal

      Wonderfully put... Loved the change of pace throughout and the mood swings. Amazing! Well done! Voted up, awesome and sharing!

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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Thanks Algarveview-

      Glad you liked them. Hope to see you again.

      -DW

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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Hi Beyond-

      Thank you. Yes, these can be read as pretty "tingly". I had held off on publishing these for that reason. When I saw what some other hubbers had posted though...

      I appreciate your comments.

      -DW

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Darryl!

      I have never read a more beautiful poem of passion as this one!

      Flawless poetry my friend :)

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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Hello Rahul-

      High praise indeed, coming, as it is, from a talented hard working poet. Thank you.

      -DW

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      I am seduced by your haikus

      My favorite one is

      "Impatient mouths match

      Fueling and fanning the flames

      Unquenchable thirst"

      Voted up and away!

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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Thank you Sue-

      These are pretty direct, but I hope the images I was trying to weave overcomes the somewhat raw language.

      Thanks again for dropping by.

      -DW

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      This is a beautifully written set--

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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Hi Audrey-

      Thanks for coming by. Glad you enjoyed them.

      -DW

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