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Universe (Haiku)

Updated on August 9, 2012

Haiku: Universe


Burning yellow orb

Candle in the dark, life alone

On a mote of dust

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      ThatFatGuy 5 years ago from Here and there

      Thanks Cashmere! Your Haiku "Vibrant View" is the best one i've read so far on HP!

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Haiku poems are a favorite of mine to write. This was incredible and well written. Voted up, awesome, and interesting :)

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      ThatFatGuy 5 years ago from Here and there

      Thank you very much Christy!!

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      Christy Birmingham 5 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      I like the part 'candle in the dark', good image. I vote beautiful and will share too.

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      ThatFatGuy 5 years ago from Here and there

      Thank you very much. I appreciate the kind words.

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      ignugent17 5 years ago

      Very intense haiku. Fascinating picture too. Thanks for sharing!