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Hair 37

Updated on April 24, 2012

Hair 37 is out of place

it disgraces my face

what the hell I just can’t win

I’m so damn homely with these zits on my skin.

How could any man want to be with me?

I’m downright ugly, my cheeks are hairy.

I’ll spend two hours here, curse this mirror,

lose all hope in the way I appear.

I’ll probably cry, just wish I would die,

go to the big beauty parlor in the sky.

Maybe God can make me beautiful,

maybe he can’t do a damn thing.

I look at my wedding ring, my husband

must be blind. I must be all he can find.

I mean look at me, all these features so ghastly,

I would pay anyone any fee

if they could reverse this atrocity.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Man you do not need polls... you are a great poet...

      The poem here outlines a complex most woman have...(no offence intended to anyone...:))I saw it in my mother, my girlfriend, my sister... and my friends who are girls..

      great poem... gave me chuckles

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      Brian Lawson 5 years ago from Windsor, Va.

      Yes I actually wrote this about my sister! She is a real trip lol! Thanks for commenting!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      love your poem all women go through this unfortunately but that's life. but you did outline it very well and it did make me chuckle.

      voted up

      Debbie

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      Brian Lawson 5 years ago from Windsor, Va.

      Thanks Debbie! :)

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      What a wonderful poem about the dilemma of a girl!

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      Brian Lawson 5 years ago from Windsor, Va.

      Thanks Vinaya! It is a pretty common thing amongst women I'm afraid lol.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      this is a great poem poet...love it it...keep it up...

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