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Halloween Poem
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dig the knife a little deeper
the pain isn't great enough
I want to be a real creeper
one that takes your heart
breaking into a million pieces
never mind who I am
or what I am
I really do not matter !
it is what you are ,what you feel
and what you can steal
what feelings I have
what feelings I give
there is no reason for me to live so
dig the knife a bit deeper, deeper
my blood will run, all over the floor
wishing, wishing I had more
to make you feel if you can
who and what I really am
so turn that knife, twist and pull
if it makes you feel whole
Comments
Love the picture and the short, vivid poem. Sort of dark but also very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
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no body...surprise to hear that from you...LOL I reckon it does sound like a pirate...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Must be the gypsy in me LOL
Wow, that describes a pirate alright. A soul hurting and collecting booty. By any means necessary. Don't get too close to me unless you are prepared to cut me, to find out who I am. Take what you can and give nothing back. Hugs Ma!
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cwarden...I have to agree with you, not what I usually write...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Great and unusual poem! Thanks for sharing it.
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Eiddwen...Thanks for commenting and Take care too...:O) Hugs G-Ma
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Well 'ralwus' it seems it can be just about whatever you can imagine...Thanks for stopping by :O) Hugs G-Ma
Deep and mysterious Merle. Is it a pumpkin speaking to you? Us?
I enjoyed this hub. Thank you so much for sharing.
Take care G-Ma Johnson.
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nothing compared to saddlerider1's story....Hi sweet Lady...Having a nice day I hope...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Very scary poem...I will leave the light on!
(((HUGS))) G-Ma! :)
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Pollyannaiana...yep...I just made 12 small apple pies and 6 tarts the day before yesterday, from all the apples I have...Yummm...wish I could send you a picture...but I think I have posted them here long ago, I do this every fall...:O) Hugs and thanks for commenting G-Ma
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saddlerider1...yes, I feel it too. Deeply and it hurts...Thanks for commenting...:O) Hugs G-Ma
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justom...yes...life and death...Have a fun Halloween, don't eat too much candy...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Makes me wish I had a red apple!
Yes I say well done to. I can feel that knife digging a little deeper and I'm not even an apple:0)
Oh the life (and death) of a pumpkin. Well done G-ma!! Peace!! Tom
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