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Halloween Poem

Updated on October 20, 2010
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eeeeek

dig the knife a little deeper

the pain isn't great enough

I want to be a real creeper

one that takes your heart

breaking into a million pieces

never mind who I am

or what I am

I really do not matter !

it is what you are ,what you feel

and what you can steal

what feelings I have

what feelings I give

there is no reason for me to live so

dig the knife a bit deeper, deeper

my blood will run, all over the floor

wishing, wishing I had more

to make you feel if you can

who and what I really am

so turn that knife, twist and pull

if it makes you feel whole

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      Love the picture and the short, vivid poem. Sort of dark but also very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      no body...surprise to hear that from you...LOL I reckon it does sound like a pirate...:O) Hugs G-Ma

      Must be the gypsy in me LOL

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      Robert E Smith 6 years ago from Rochester, New York

      Wow, that describes a pirate alright. A soul hurting and collecting booty. By any means necessary. Don't get too close to me unless you are prepared to cut me, to find out who I am. Take what you can and give nothing back. Hugs Ma!

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      cwarden...I have to agree with you, not what I usually write...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      cwarden 6 years ago from USA

      Great and unusual poem! Thanks for sharing it.

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      Eiddwen...Thanks for commenting and Take care too...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      Well 'ralwus' it seems it can be just about whatever you can imagine...Thanks for stopping by :O) Hugs G-Ma

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      ralwus 6 years ago

      Deep and mysterious Merle. Is it a pumpkin speaking to you? Us?

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      I enjoyed this hub. Thank you so much for sharing.

      Take care G-Ma Johnson.

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      nothing compared to saddlerider1's story....Hi sweet Lady...Having a nice day I hope...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Raven King 6 years ago from Cabin Fever

      Very scary poem...I will leave the light on!

      (((HUGS))) G-Ma! :)

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      Pollyannaiana...yep...I just made 12 small apple pies and 6 tarts the day before yesterday, from all the apples I have...Yummm...wish I could send you a picture...but I think I have posted them here long ago, I do this every fall...:O) Hugs and thanks for commenting G-Ma

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      saddlerider1...yes, I feel it too. Deeply and it hurts...Thanks for commenting...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      justom...yes...life and death...Have a fun Halloween, don't eat too much candy...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Pollyannalana 6 years ago from US

      Makes me wish I had a red apple!

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      Yes I say well done to. I can feel that knife digging a little deeper and I'm not even an apple:0)

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      justom 6 years ago from 41042

      Oh the life (and death) of a pumpkin. Well done G-ma!! Peace!! Tom