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Handful of cloud to be....( A poem)

Updated on February 15, 2015
Painting is done by self ( Deergha) ...." Hand full of cloud to be..."
Painting is done by self ( Deergha) ...." Hand full of cloud to be..." | Source

This is a painting inspired by a photograph from online collections of sea shells beside sea. The phases of making this painting "Hand full of cloud to be.." ( Same name with this poem) is presented below with the progress of the poem. After the painting is completed the idea of this poem came to my mind. So I have decided to make the both in one hub to go together. Here it goes the words to be expressed the flow of the painting and to make it a complete work. It is a new idea here and well....I am bit nervous as how all you my friends out there will take it. Anyway I am waiting for your precious comment and any view to criticize my work is all welcome here. Thank you for your time here always !

Phases of the painting
Phases of the painting | Source
Making phases of the painting
Making phases of the painting | Source
Making phases of the paiting
Making phases of the paiting | Source
Making phases of the painting
Making phases of the painting | Source
Making phases of the painting
Making phases of the painting | Source

A handful of cloud

Let me float in the sky

Across the oceans

And above the valleys

To cuddle in your warmth

Till I touch your heart

May be you want to tell me

You want to be my sky

May be you are my home

To feel so strongly ground

A handful of cloud

Let me fly in the dream

Across the miles

And above the rivers

To cry in your arms

Till I smile in happiness

May be you want to tell me

You want to be my dream

May be you are my colour

To feel so rainbow in mind

A handful of cloud

Let me flow in the fire

Across the heats

And above the boundaries

To die in your infinity

Till I am born in ecstasy

May be you want to tell me

You want to be my fuel

May be you are my anchor

To feel so dazzled in shine

A handful of cloud

Let me surround you

Let me be the pearl of your eye

The sea shells to cocoon me

And the sands to make me warm

The waves of your love

Let it be the ocean of eternity

And a death to die for

Till a life becomes you!!!!!

A handful of cloud..

To fly and to float

Aimlessly till I land in your embrace

Free as a bird and light as a feather

Till you smile at me

Pearl of your eyes and hug me like the sands

Waving around me like time

And a handful of cloud to be again and again...!!!

Flying on cloud...

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      the poem is fantastic.. but I just love the title it packs ppunches a handful of cloud... yeah love it

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      Ann Carr 2 years ago from SW England

      I like the repetition of 'handful of cloud' and I love the poetry. Your idea of connecting it to your painting in the way you have is original. Many have used painting to inspire but you have made it part of your poem, the progression and the components that work together. I love that idea and your execution is great. You do not need to worry about its reception!

      Ann

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wonderful painting and poem . They really go hand in hand and connect well, especially as you show the progression of the painting. Well done.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Delightful and visionary. My kind of poem as far as imagery is concerned. Exquisite!

      There's much beauty in your art and the music is 'cool.' Hari Om!

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear friend Frank,

      Many thanks for liking the title of the poem and your being here. Your comment is valuable always. Hope you are doing good.

      Take care and God bless you always

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear friend Ann,

      Many thanks for your time here and your valuable comment. Thank you very much for liking my idea of clubbing together the painting and the poem. I admire your support in this one.

      Hope you are doing great. Take care and God bless you always

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      manatita44...thank you very much for your continual support always. Glad that you have liked this one.

      Take care and hope you are doing great.

      Hari Om!!!!

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      mr-veg 2 years ago from Colorado United States

      Wonderful Painting and soulful poem... or other way around wonderful poem and soulful painting :) Great Job as a poet and painter !! Kudos !

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @mr-veg, for your time and comment here. Hope you are doing good. Take care and God bless you

      Deergha

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      Dipti 2 years ago

      This is so nicely woven...Love the title and the flow is really good.

      ' To die in your infinity

      Till I am born in ecstasy' - Love the line !

      Keep writing ! Cheerios ~

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Oh My my ....you are here... dearest Dipti....welcome to my slice of world very much...:-)

      Thank you for honoring me with your kind visit, your time here. Your view is much cherished about. God bless you always

      hugs your way

      Deergha

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      Patricia Scott 2 years ago from sunny Florida

      Beautiful imagery.. I love being down by the shore touching the sands and the shells and am swept up with the clouds as they carry my soul.

      Voted up+++ and shared

      Once again, special Angels are on the way to you ps

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dearest Patricia,

      Many thanks for being here. Its lovely to know that you love what I have tried to paint through my words and brushes out there.

      Many thanks always for the wonderful Angels.....I can almost see divine Angels smile over you there !!!

      Take care

      Hugs and love your way

      Deergha

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      Rayne123 2 years ago

      Beautiful poem and painting.

      Very inspiring.

      I would love to have my own drawings/paintings with my poems.

      Great work

      Laurie

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      Lisa VanVorst 2 years ago from New Jersey

      A beautiful poem with beautiful music. Very relaxing.

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Laurie

      Many thanks for your time out here. Glad that you have liked the painting as well the poem here. You may try to draw or paint and then you can write poems dear. Hope you are good today.

      Take care and God bless you

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @lisavanvorst ...for your time and your words here. Take care and God bless you always ahead.

      Deergha

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      Deb Hirt 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This reminds me so of carefree times, like floating on air.

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Deb, my friend....yes I just was trying to create that kind of a feeling here. Thanks always for relating. Hope you are doing good.

      Deergha

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